Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I do relax and wait for people" and "I exercise my time for people," which is unclear. Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually remain calm and give others the time they need without rushing them.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "ride on me." Try to use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when people annoy me or ignore my efforts. For example, it frustrates me when I give others space to do things properly, but they choose to do them incorrectly.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your feelings but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, link your example smoothly to your main idea.

Ejemplo: I usually feel frustrated and tired when I have to repeat tasks many times. For instance, when I was learning to drive, practising repeatedly without improvement made me feel discouraged.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating the same idea and use more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, as a registered nurse, patience is essential because caring for sick patients requires understanding and calmness to provide effective treatment.

Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to simplify your sentences and use correct grammar. Also, link your ideas clearly to show contrast between past and present.

Ejemplo: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned what patience means and how important it is in daily life.

× Is really frustrates me and I don't take it in when people try to ride on me.

✓ It really frustrates me and I don't take it in when people try to ride on me.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' before the verb 'really frustrates'. Every sentence needs a subject to be grammatically correct.

× I exercise my time for people.

✓ I exercise patience with people.

The phrase 'exercise my time for people' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'exercise patience with people' to convey the intended meaning.

× It makes me feel that I'm not better and it discouraged me.

✓ It makes me feel that I'm not better and it discourages me.

The verb 'discouraged' is in the past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'discourages' to match 'makes' and 'feel'.

× Without this, he cannot be able to render an effective care to patients.

✓ Without this, one cannot be able to render effective care to patients.

The pronoun 'he' is too specific and inconsistent with the general statement. Using 'one' is more appropriate for general statements. Also, 'an effective care' should be 'effective care' without 'an'.

× I believe I'm more patient now than when I was growing up because as a child I don't know the quality to be patient or I don't I doesn't know what it means to be patient.

✓ I believe I'm more patient now than when I was growing up because as a child I didn't know the quality of being patient or what it means to be patient.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'don't know' and 'doesn't know' when referring to the past. It should be past tense 'didn't know'. Also, 'quality to be patient' should be 'quality of being patient'.

× But as an adult now, I know they what it takes to be patient and what someone needs to do to have that skill.

✓ But as an adult now, I know what it takes to be patient and what someone needs to do to have that skill.

The word 'they' is incorrectly used and unnecessary in this sentence. Removing 'they' corrects the sentence.