Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use the correct form of adjectives and provide a bit more explanation to make your answer more natural and effective. For example, use 'patient' instead of 'patient' as a noun and add why patience is important.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am a patient person. I believe patience is one of the most important qualities, especially in today's fast-paced world, because it helps us handle difficult situations calmly.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct vocabulary like 'wait' instead of 'wet' and express your feelings clearly.

Ejemplo: Although I consider myself patient, I feel impatient when I have to wait for an unknown amount of time, such as waiting in a hospital without knowing when I will be seen.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words like 'for example' properly and correct phrases like 'depends on' and 'outcome'.

Ejemplo: It depends on the task. For example, if it's schoolwork, I usually feel relaxed and energetic because I understand the outcome and its importance.

Sugerencia: Clarify your answer with correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain your job role briefly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires patience because I work in a department where I often have to wait for tasks or information to arrive before I can proceed.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Express your idea clearly and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I am more patient and wiser now than when I was a child.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I am much more patient and wiser now compared to when I was a child.

× Use whether I am a patient person but one of the things that make me impatient.

✓ Whether I am a patient person or not, one of the things that makes me impatient is waiting for an unknown time, for example in a hospital.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and connectors, making it unclear. Adding 'Whether... or not' clarifies the condition, and correcting verb agreement improves clarity.

× Is to make me wet for unknown time, for example in hospital.

✓ It is waiting for an unknown time, for example in a hospital.

The verb 'make me wet' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'make me wait'. Also, 'waiting' as a gerund is needed here to function as the subject complement.

× It depends of what the things I have to do.

✓ It depends on what things I have to do.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'of'. Also, 'the things' can be simplified to 'things' for natural expression.

× because I know what is the outcoming of it.

✓ because I know what the outcome of it is.

'Outcoming' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'outcome'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'outcome', and the sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

× Yes, the reason of this is I'm working at low department.

✓ Yes, the reason for this is that I'm working in the low department.

The correct preposition is 'for' after 'reason'. Also, 'in' is used for departments, and 'that' introduces the clause properly.

× So everything there, you have to wait after it's coming.

✓ So, there, you have to wait for things to arrive.

The phrase 'wait after it's coming' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'wait for' something to arrive or come.

× Yes, I feel again a lot more patience and wisdom than before I was children.

✓ Yes, I feel a lot more patient and wise than when I was a child.

'Patience' and 'wisdom' are nouns; the adjectives 'patient' and 'wise' are needed here. Also, 'before I was children' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'.