Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't say I'm very patient because I often get frustrated when things don't go as I expect. However, since I'm aware of this, I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting. Therefore, I believe with practice, I can become more patient over time.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'stay care' nên là 'stay calm'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và chi tiết hơn.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when things take too long or when people don't keep their promises. For instance, waiting in a long line or dealing with someone who is always late for deadlines can be very frustrating. However, I try to stay calm and remind myself that getting angry won't help.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'knowing' thành 'reading' và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel a bit tired or distracted, especially if it's boring. However, when I'm doing something I enjoy, like reading or listening to music, I can stay focused and don't feel impatient at all.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'other student'. Bạn nên sửa lại câu mở đầu và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, as a student, I think patience is really important. I often have to spend a lot of time studying or doing assignments, which can be stressful. Therefore, being patient helps me stay focused, understand things better, and finish my work more effectively.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như 'more patient' cần có động từ 'am' và 'set up' nên là 'get upset'. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I used to get upset easily if things didn't go my way. However, as I have grown up, I have learned to stay calm and understand that some things just take time.

× Yes, other student.

✓ Yes, other students.

The pronoun 'other' should be followed by a plural noun 'students' to match the context. 'Student' is singular, but here it refers to a group, so plural form is needed.

× I try to stay care and remind myself that getting angry won't help.

✓ I try to stay careful and remind myself that getting angry won't help.

The word 'care' is a noun or verb, but here an adjective is needed to describe the state of staying cautious. The correct adjective is 'careful'.

× waiting in a long line or deadline with someone who is always late can be frustrating.

✓ waiting in a long line or missing a deadline with someone who is always late can be frustrating.

The phrase 'deadline' is a countable noun and needs an article or quantifier. Also, 'deadline' is not something you 'wait in', so 'missing a deadline' is more appropriate here.

× I definitely more patient now than when I was a child.

✓ I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child.

The verb 'am' is missing to form the present tense 'I am more patient'. Without the verb, the sentence is incomplete.

× But as I have grow up I have learned to stay calm and understand that something just takes time.

✓ But as I have grown up, I have learned to stay calm and understand that some things just take time.

The past participle of 'grow' is 'grown', not 'grow'. Also, 'something' should be plural 'some things' to match the context, and 'take' should be plural form to agree with plural subject.