Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "wait coming in stressful situation" which should be "wait in stressful situations." Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can remain calm and composed even in stressful situations. Moreover, I am quite persistent and able to stay focused on tasks for a long time without losing motivation.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has unclear phrases like "I can also help improve" which seems incorrect. Try to clarify your points and use linking words to organize your ideas. Also, avoid vague expressions like "So it depends."

Ejemplo: I usually feel impatient when I receive automated responses or have to wait for someone who is late. Additionally, doing tedious routine work for a long time or not seeing quick results can make me lose patience.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat informal and contains filler words like "uh" and repeated words "become become." Also, the phrase "because of people around me" is vague. Try to be more specific and concise, and avoid fillers to sound more natural and confident.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes get frustrated, especially if people around me are distracting or uncooperative. However, I try to stay focused to complete the task.

Sugerencia: Your answer is off-topic because the question asks about your job, but you talk about children and patience in general. Also, there are grammatical errors and awkward expressions like "patient is the most formidable resort" and "makes people rich after the stars." Focus on answering the question directly and use clear, relevant vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often have to deal with challenging situations and help others understand complex information. Being patient allows me to perform my duties effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, with good use of linking words like "because" and "as a result." However, you can improve by adding a concluding sentence to summarize your point and by varying your vocabulary slightly.

Ejemplo: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have gained experience in handling unexpected situations and managing my emotions. Additionally, practicing yoga has taught me calming techniques that help me stay composed.

× Well, I guess I can say yes as I am able to wait coming in stressful situation and can stay in control even when I'm irritated.

✓ Well, I guess I can say yes as I am able to wait in stressful situations and can stay in control even when I'm irritated.

The phrase 'wait coming in stressful situation' is incorrect. The verb 'wait' should be followed by the preposition 'in' and the noun should be pluralized to 'stressful situations' to indicate general situations. Also, 'coming' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Well, I guess I can say yes as I am able to wait coming in stressful situation and can stay in control even when I'm irritated.

✓ Well, I guess I can say yes as I am able to wait in stressful situations and can stay in control even when I'm irritated.

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because the speaker refers to stressful situations in general, not a single one.

× I can also help improve because of doing some scrupulous routine work for a long time or failing to get quick results.

✓ I can also become impatient because of doing some scrupulous routine work for a long time or failing to get quick results.

The phrase 'help improve' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'become impatient'. Also, 'because of doing' is acceptable but could be improved by rephrasing, but the main issue is the incorrect verb phrase.

× Well, as I mentioned before, I can huff and puff if I do something for a long time and I can, uh, easily become become angry because of people. Around me.

✓ Well, as I mentioned before, I can huff and puff if I do something for a long time and I can easily become angry because of people around me.

The sentence has a repeated word 'become' and an unnecessary period splitting the sentence incorrectly. Also, 'because of people. Around me.' should be combined into 'because of people around me' for correct sentence structure.

× To my mind, I think that every child need people to be patient because patient is the most formidable resort which makes people rich after the stars and give them way to remarkable results.

✓ To my mind, I think that every child needs people to be patient because patience is the most formidable resource which makes people rich after the stars and gives them a way to remarkable results.

'Every child need' should be 'every child needs' to agree in number and person. 'patient' should be 'patience' as a noun. 'resort' should be 'resource'. 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject. Also, 'way' should be preceded by 'a'.

× To my mind, I think that every child need people to be patient because patient is the most formidable resort which makes people rich after the stars and give them way to remarkable results.

✓ To my mind, I think that every child needs people to be patient because patience is the most formidable resource which makes people rich after the stars and gives them a way to remarkable results.

The word 'patient' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; the correct noun form 'patience' should be used to express the concept.

× Patient helps people acquire positive attitude, supplies them with tranquility and gives the power to overcome roadblocks.

✓ Patience helps people acquire a positive attitude, supplies them with tranquility and gives them the power to overcome roadblocks.

'Patient' should be 'Patience' as the noun. 'positive attitude' should be 'a positive attitude' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'gives the power' should be 'gives them the power' for clarity.

× Yes, of course, To my mind, I think that every child need people to be patient because patient is the most formidable resort which makes people rich after the stars and give them way to remarkable results.

✓ Yes, of course, To my mind, I think that every child needs people to be patient because patience is the most formidable resource which makes people rich after the stars and gives them a way to remarkable results.

Repeated from above: 'every child need' should be 'every child needs'; 'patient' should be 'patience'; 'resort' should be 'resource'; 'give' should be 'gives'; 'way' should be 'a way'.