Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar, and use coherent linking. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting points. Avoid filler sounds (umm, uh) and incorrect word forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I work as a psychosocial school counselor. My job requires a lot of patience for active listening and providing empathetic, therapeutic interventions during individual sessions.

Sugerencia: Start directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence about what makes you impatient, then give a specific example and consequence. Remove hesitations and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense.

Ejemplo: I get impatient when students disrupt classes during awareness sessions. For example, when teenagers talk over each other during a health workshop, it wastes time and prevents important information from being communicated.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, coherent description of feelings and a specific example with past tense accuracy. Focus on one or two emotions and explain why you feel that way, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel uncomfortable and uncertain about the outcome because progress can be slow. For example, after returning to athletics recently, I felt unsure about my performance until I gradually rebuilt my fitness.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and tighten the explanation. Use correct articles and plurals, and structure: state the requirement, then give one or two specific duties that need patience. Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job definitely requires patience. Counseling involves active listening and implementing therapeutic interventions, both of which take time and careful attention during each session.

Sugerencia: Make a clear comparison using correct grammar (e.g., 'more patient now than when I was a child') and give a concise specific example. Avoid unclear phrases and fillers; explain briefly why you changed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am much more patient now than when I was a child. As a child I used to cry at weddings or long events, but now I can stay calm and handle long, formal occasions without getting upset.

× Yes, generally I am a patient person because I am working as a psychosocial school counselor.

✓ Yes, generally I am a patient person because I work as a psychosocial school counselor.

The original uses 'am working' which is present continuous; for permanent or regular occupations the simple present 'work' is correct. Use simple present to describe jobs or regular roles. Suggestion: say 'I work as a...' for routines or permanent roles.

× Umm, this my profession requires lot of patience during my individual counseling sessions, uh, for active listening, uh, putting empathetic approach, therapeutic intervention.

✓ This profession requires a lot of patience during my individual counseling sessions, for active listening, using an empathetic approach, and therapeutic intervention.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'lot', incorrect demonstrative 'this my profession' should be 'this profession' or 'my profession', and noun phrases need 'using an empathetic approach'. Fix articles and parallel structure. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'lot', use 'my profession requires' or 'this profession requires', and maintain parallel gerund forms.

× So uh, patient sees essential.

✓ So, patience is essential.

The phrase 'patient sees essential' is ungrammatical. The intended noun is 'patience' and the verb 'is' required. Fix by using subject 'patience' + 'is essential'. Suggestion: say 'patience is essential'.

× I am working as a psychosocial school counselor.

✓ I work as a psychosocial school counselor.

Repeated; use simple present 'work' for a regular job rather than present continuous 'am working'. Suggestion: use 'I work as...' for occupations.

× And uh, that time, umm, someone will, uh, talk together and, uh, just trying to disrupt the class.

✓ At that time, someone would talk among themselves and try to disrupt the class.

Original mixes future/modal 'will' and present participle 'trying', creating tense inconsistency. Use 'would' to describe habitual past behavior or 'try' infinitive for actions. Also 'talk together' -> 'talk among themselves'. Suggestion: use consistent past/habitual forms: 'would... and try...'.

× Actually, I feel discomfort and confused about the result, uh, when I am doing something for a long time.

✓ Actually, I feel discomfort and confusion about the result when I do something for a long time.

Use simple present 'do' for general situations rather than present continuous 'am doing'. Also 'confused' (adjective) should be 'confusion' (noun) to parallel 'discomfort'. Suggestion: use 'I feel discomfort and confusion' and 'when I do something for a long time.'

× For example, uh, I was an athlete in my school period and after 20 years back, I recently joined back to athletic events and I feel this.

✓ For example, I was an athlete during my school years, and after about 20 years, I recently rejoined athletic events and felt this.

Issues: 'school period' -> 'school years'; 'after 20 years back' is awkward—use 'after about 20 years'; 'joined back to athletic events' -> 'rejoined athletic events'; tense consistency: 'recently' with past 'rejoined' so use 'felt'. Suggestion: keep time expressions clear and use appropriate past tense.

× Definitely my job requires patience.

✓ Definitely, my job requires patience.

Missing comma for clarity but grammatically acceptable; minor punctuation. Also could be 'Definitely, my job requires patience.' Suggestion: add comma after 'Definitely' for natural speech rhythm.

× Uh, patience is essential in counseling process, uh, for active listening and uh, each sessions we need to, uh, take therapeutic intervention, uh, that need lot of time and also for the sessions.

✓ Patience is essential in the counseling process for active listening, and in each session we need to take therapeutic interventions that require a lot of time.

Errors: missing 'the' before 'counseling process', 'each sessions' should be 'each session', 'take therapeutic intervention' -> 'take therapeutic interventions', 'that need lot of time' -> 'that require a lot of time'. Fix article use, singular/plural agreement, and verb choice. Suggestion: ensure singular/plural agreement and include necessary articles.

× Absolutely, I am more patient than compared with my childhood when I was a kid, I will cry for everything, for example, while attending the marriage functions or any other ceremonies.

✓ Absolutely, I am more patient now compared with my childhood. When I was a kid, I would cry about everything—for example, at weddings or other ceremonies.

Original 'more patient than compared with my childhood' mixes comparative forms; use 'more patient now compared with my childhood.' Also 'I will cry' is wrong for habitual past—use 'would cry'. 'Marriage functions' -> 'weddings'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure and past habitual 'would'.

× I I don't umm patient for uh ending.

✓ I wasn't patient about endings.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Probable meaning: 'I wasn't patient about endings' (or 'I wasn't patient then'). Correct pronoun/auxiliary and adjective use required. Suggestion: simplify to 'I wasn't patient then' or 'I wasn't patient about endings' depending on intended meaning.