Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), avoid hesitation fillers, fix grammar (use 'characteristics', 'quite a patient person'), and give one specific supporting example using a linking word (for example, because/so). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often help my friends and parents with difficult tasks. For example, I spend hours calmly teaching my younger cousin math until they understand.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a topic sentence (I feel impatient when...), correct grammar ("I get impatient with my mistakes"), use linking words to explain why and one specific example, and reduce repetition. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I get impatient when I make mistakes or fail to understand something because I expect quick progress. For instance, when I struggle with a new coding problem, I often become frustrated until I take a short break and try again.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence (It depends on the task), use linking words (however, for example), correct word choice ("get passionate", "annoyed"), and give a specific example of a task. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: It depends on the task; if it's a new activity I usually feel enthusiastic at first. However, for example when I practice learning a language for hours and make slow progress, I can become annoyed.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer (Yes) then explain briefly why using correct grammar ("I work as an investor"), use linking words (because/so), and include one concrete example of a situation at work requiring patience. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job as an investor requires patience because I work closely with different people and negotiations take time. For example, when a client becomes upset about market losses, I stay calm and explain the long-term strategy.

Sugerencia: Give a clear position (Yes/No/Not sure) and then explain with a specific reason using linking words (because, although). Correct vocabulary ("still compassionate" not "stayed still", 'spoiled' rather than 'passionate' if meaning indulged). Provide one concise example from childhood.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure, although I think I'm somewhat less patient because I was an only child and often got what I wanted as a child. For example, I rarely had to wait for toys, so I had fewer opportunities to practice waiting calmly.

× To be honest with you, I don't like to describe myself and my characters because I think maybe sometimes I can lie about my, some, uh, characteristic.

✓ To be honest, I don't like to describe myself and my character because I think sometimes I might lie about some characteristics.

Problems: incorrect noun choice ('characters' should be 'character' meaning personality) and word order ('my, some, uh, characteristic' is incorrect). 'Maybe sometimes I can' is awkward; use 'sometimes I might' for possibility. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'character' for singular, place quantifiers before nouns ('some characteristics'), and use 'might' for possibility.

× But yes, I think I'm quite patient person and, uh, a lot of time I help my friends and, uh, parents that and I need to be patient for.

✓ But yes, I think I'm quite a patient person, and often I help my friends and parents, so I need to be patient.

Problems: missing article before 'patient person' (use 'a patient person'); 'a lot of time' should be 'often'; 'parents that' and 'I need to be patient for' are ungrammatical. Suggestion: add articles, use 'often' or 'a lot of the time', and connect clauses with 'so'.

× My mistakes really, I hate when I do some mistakes and when I something don't understand, I impatient on myself and I try to remind me like you need to stay patient and persistent and at the end you achieve success but it is really difficult to remind it.

✓ My mistakes really bother me; I hate when I make mistakes or don't understand something. I get impatient with myself, and I try to remind myself that you need to stay patient and persistent and eventually you will achieve success, but it is really difficult to remember.

Problems: incorrect pronouns and verb forms: 'I do some mistakes' should be 'I make mistakes'; 'when I something don't understand' should be 'don't understand something'; 'I impatient on myself' should be 'I get impatient with myself'; 'remind me' should be 'remind myself'; 'remind it' should be 'remember' or 'keep it in mind'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('make mistakes', 'get impatient with'), reflexive pronoun 'myself', and simpler sentence split.

× I think it mostly depends on the task and about what task I need to do for a long time.

✓ I think it mostly depends on the task and what I need to do for a long time.

Problems: redundant wording 'and about what task' and awkward 'I need to do for a long time'. Suggestion: streamline to 'what I need to do for a long time' to fit present tense general statement.

× If you talk about new activity, sometimes I can get a passion by myself because I try to be the best since my first trying and when something went wrong I'm annoying.

✓ If you talk about a new activity, sometimes I become passionate because I try to do my best from the first try, and when something goes wrong I get annoyed.

Problems: missing article 'a new activity'; 'get a passion by myself' is incorrect — use 'become passionate'; 'since my first trying' should be 'from the first try'; tense and adjective errors: 'when something went wrong I'm annoying' should be 'when something goes wrong I get annoyed'. Suggestion: use 'become passionate', 'do my best', and match present tense for general habits.

× Yes, currently I am a work as a investor and I work with the people so I need to stay patient during the day and even if something go bad and people sometimes are rude I need to stay patient.

✓ Yes, currently I work as an investor and I work with people, so I need to stay patient during the day. Even if something goes badly and people are sometimes rude, I need to remain patient.

Problems: incorrect structure 'I am a work as a investor' should be 'I work as an investor'; article error 'a investor' -> 'an investor'; 'work with the people' -> 'work with people'; verb form 'go bad' -> 'go badly' or 'go wrong'; run-on sentence. Suggestion: correct job phrase, use 'an', split into two sentences, and use adverb 'badly' or phrase 'go wrong'.

× I'm not sure about it. I think I stayed still compassionate person but uh, you need to mention that I'm only child in my family so every time I did whatever I want and uh get whatever I want.

✓ I'm not sure about that. I think I have remained a compassionate person, but you should know that I'm an only child in my family, so I always did what I wanted and got what I wanted.

Problems: tense and adjective errors: 'I stayed still compassionate person' should be 'I have remained a compassionate person'; article 'an only child' needed; 'every time I did whatever I want and uh get whatever I want' mixes tenses — use past 'did' and 'got' or present perfect 'have done/have gotten'. Suggestion: use 'an only child', maintain consistent tense, and use 'did what I wanted'.

× So maybe it is reason why sometimes I am passionate.

✓ So maybe that is the reason why I can be impatient sometimes.

Problems: 'it is reason' should be 'that is the reason'; 'I am passionate' is incorrect meaning — likely meant 'impatient'. Suggestion: use 'the reason' and the correct adjective 'impatient', and place 'sometimes' appropriately.