Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar and finish sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid unusual words like 'inculcated' if not used correctly and fix possessive/grammar errors.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. My mother taught me patience from a young age, and I need it in my work with children, which often involves handling slow or repetitive tasks calmly.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, use correct vocabulary and finish the thought. Replace awkward phrases (e.g. 'inextensible hours', 'gets on my nose') with natural expressions and add a brief example and a linking phrase about how you are improving.

Ejemplo: Waiting makes me impatient, especially long delays. For example, when public transport is delayed for over an hour I get frustrated, but I try to manage this by reading or listening to podcasts to stay calm.

Sugerencia: Provide a complete response with a linking word and a specific strategy to handle the problem. Use fewer repetitions and correct punctuation. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ejemplo: At first I feel excited and motivated, but halfway through I often lose interest and become irritated. To counter this, I now break long tasks into short timed sessions with regular breaks, which helps me stay focused until the end.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use clear grammar and complete sentences. When mentioning neurodivergent children, be respectful and specific about challenges and techniques you use to remain patient.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires a great deal of patience because I work with children, including neurodivergent kids who may become upset more quickly. I stay patient by using calm voice, clear routines, and short activities to reduce overstimulation.

Sugerencia: Good direct comparison. Improve coherence by using linking words and correcting repetition. Give one specific example that shows how you are more patient now.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than I was as a child. For instance, I used to throw tantrums when things didn't go my way, but now I wait calmly and try to find solutions, such as discussing problems or taking deep breaths before reacting.

× This was thought to be by my mother.

✓ My mother taught me this.

The original uses an incorrect passive construction with the wrong preposition 'to be by'. Use the active voice 'My mother taught me this' for clarity and correct verb usage. Also aligns with natural English word order. Suggestion: Use active voice where appropriate and place the agent before the verb.'

× Additionally, my job requires a lot of patience from my.

✓ Additionally, my job requires a lot of patience from me.

The sentence ends with an incorrect object 'my' instead of the pronoun 'me'. The verb phrase 'requires patience from' needs an object pronoun. Use 'me' as the correct object form. Suggestion: Use object pronouns (me, him, her, us, them) after prepositions.

× I tend to get very impatient whenever I am required to wait for inextensible hours.

✓ I tend to get very impatient whenever I am required to wait for long hours.

The adjective 'inextensible' is not natural in this context; 'long hours' is the common collocation. The preposition 'for' with 'wait' is acceptable here. Suggestion: Prefer common collocations like 'wait for long hours' or 'wait a long time'.

× It gets on my nose and I become very agitated.

✓ It really annoys me and I become very agitated.

The idiom 'gets on my nose' is incorrect. Use 'annoys me' or 'gets on my nerves'. This correction uses natural vocabulary and preserves the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use standard idioms such as 'gets on my nerves' or 'annoys me'.

× However, I am working on this because I'm.

✓ However, I am working on this because I want to improve.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends with a fragment 'I'm.' Provide a complete clause explaining the reason. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; complete the thought after 'because'.

× However I tend to lose that initial enthusiasm just midway and by the end of a tedious task I tend to get very agitated.

✓ However, I tend to lose that initial enthusiasm midway, and by the end of a tedious task I become very agitated.

Use a comma after 'However' and avoid redundant 'tend' repetition; change 'just midway' to 'midway' and 'tend to get' to 'become' for concision and natural flow. Suggestion: Use punctuation for clarity and reduce redundant verbs.

× This has been one pattern that I am repeating, nevertheless I'm trying to break it and.

✓ This has been a pattern I keep repeating; nevertheless, I'm trying to break it.

The original ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and.' Replace with a complete sentence, use 'a pattern' (not 'one pattern') and add proper punctuation. Suggestion: Avoid trailing conjunctions and ensure sentences are complete.

× Since I work with children, I am supposed to exhibit exceptional levels levels of patience and that is because children get gets annoyed way more faster than adults do.

✓ Since I work with children, I am supposed to exhibit exceptional levels of patience because children get annoyed much faster than adults do.

There are repeated words 'levels levels' and 'get gets' which are typographical/repetition errors. 'Way more faster' is ungrammatical; use 'much faster.' Removed redundant 'that is' for concision. Suggestion: Proofread to remove repetitions and use comparative adverbs like 'much faster' rather than 'way more faster'.

× Especially that I work with neurodivergent kids, they reach another level of irritability even if you.

✓ Especially because I work with neurodivergent kids, they reach another level of irritability even if you are very patient.

The clause is incomplete ('even if you.'). Add a completing phrase such as 'are very patient.' Also use 'because' instead of 'that' for causal clarity. Suggestion: Complete conditional clauses and use 'because' to introduce reasons.

× As far as I can remember, I was a child that was quite prone to tantrums and would throw a fit of rage if something was done if something was not done according to me.

✓ As far as I can remember, I was a child who was quite prone to tantrums and would throw a fit if something was not done according to my wishes.

Use 'who' for people not 'that.' The original repeats 'if something was done if something was not done' which is confusing; keep only the negative condition 'if something was not done.' Replace 'according to me' with the more natural 'according to my wishes.' Suggestion: Use 'who' for people, avoid repetition, and use natural expressions like 'according to my wishes.'

× Although now I am quite patient in regards to most of the things in my life.

✓ Although now I am quite patient with most things in my life.

Use 'patient with' rather than 'patient in regards to.' Also 'most things' is more natural than 'most of the things.' The original is a sentence fragment starting with 'Although'; better to remove 'Although' or connect it to the previous sentence. Suggestion: Use correct prepositional collocations like 'patient with' and avoid sentence fragments.