Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you are patient, then give one or two specific conditions with linking words. Use correct tense and vocabulary (depend → depends; patient; reasonable). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I am patient in some situations but not always. For example, I can stay calm when I wait in line if there is a good reason, such as a long queue at the bank. However, if someone is rude or ignores facts, I quickly become impatient.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly with a topic sentence naming the cause of impatience, then give a specific example and a brief reason using linking words (for example, because, when). Correct vocabulary (people, understand, reasons). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when people refuse to listen to logical reasons. For example, when colleagues ignore clear explanations and repeat the same mistake, I get frustrated because it wastes everyone's time.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement about your feelings, then give specific examples of what you do to cope. Use linking words (so, therefore, because) and correct grammar (it takes, I feel bored, solution). Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel bored and lose concentration. Therefore, I break the task into smaller parts and set short goals every 20–30 minutes. This helps me stay focused and finish the work more efficiently.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no statement about whether your job requires patience and support it with a specific example of a task that needs patience. Use correct words (customers/clients, sometimes, motivated, inquiries) and linking words (for example, because, so). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often deal with difficult customers. For example, when clients are unmotivated or confused, I need to explain things calmly and write follow-up enquiries, which can be time-consuming but necessary.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a comparative statement and give a specific reason or example showing how you have improved. Use linking words (because, now) and clear vocabulary (more patient, handle situations, communicate). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned how to manage stressful situations. For example, instead of reacting immediately, I now take a moment to listen and then explain the problem calmly.

× It's depend on your situations.

✓ It depends on the situation.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: 'It' requires the third person singular present form 'depends' (Grammar problem type 6 and 27). 'Situations' is plural but context refers to 'the situation' or 'your situation' as a general condition, so use 'situation' or 'your situations' with consistent phrasing. Suggestion: Use 'It depends on the situation' for a natural response.

× The station has a reasonable I can be a patent person for death, but if I think it's not reasonable, I'm not.

✓ In reasonable situations I can be a patient person, but if I think something is unreasonable, I am not.

Multiple errors: word choice and adjective/adverb misuse (Grammar problem type 13). 'Station' is incorrect; likely 'situation'. 'Patent' should be 'patient'. 'For death' is nonsensical; likely 'sometimes' or removed. Also verb forms: 'I can be a patient person' is fine; contrast uses 'I am not' rather than contraction misuse. Suggestion: Use clear vocabulary and correct adjective forms: 'patient' and 'situation'.

× I don't see persons that don't buy to understand the actual opinions even they are show the reasons.

✓ I don't understand people who refuse to try to understand other opinions even when they show their reasons.

Pronoun and relative clause errors (Grammar problem type 12). 'Persons' is awkward; use 'people'. 'Don't buy to understand' is incorrect—likely 'refuse to try to understand' or 'don't try to understand'. 'Even they are show the reasons' should be 'even when they show their reasons'. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns and relative clauses: 'people who refuse to try to understand other opinions even when they show their reasons.'

× It take too long model like a one hour that's mean I cannot must mention twist or focus.

✓ It takes too long, like one hour, which means I cannot concentrate or stay focused.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice (Grammar problem type 1 and 27). 'It' requires 'takes' (third person singular). 'Model' is incorrect; likely 'for example' or 'like'. 'That's mean' should be 'which means'. 'Cannot must mention twist or focus' is unintelligible—use 'cannot concentrate or stay focused.' Suggestion: Use correct verb form 'takes' and clear verbs 'concentrate' or 'focus.'

× Is this so I'm fee bored sometimes.

✓ Because of this, I feel bored sometimes.

Word choice and grammar: 'fee' should be 'feel' and sentence structure is awkward (Grammar problem type 13 and 26). 'Is this so' is unnatural; use 'Because of this' or 'So'. Suggestion: Use 'I feel bored sometimes' and place the reason before or after clearly.

× I want to make it like an compete in a reason, so I try to find a Sol solution to complete it.

✓ I want to make it into a competition or a challenge, so I try to find a solid solution to finish it.

Preposition and word choice errors (Grammar problem type 11 and 13). 'Make it like an compete in a reason' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'make it into a competition' or 'make it more competitive'. 'Sol solution' should be 'solid solution' and 'complete it' better as 'finish it.' Suggestion: Use 'make it into a competition' and 'find a solid solution.'

× You are with your parents partying for one hour possessions.

✓ You are with your parents partying for one hour sometimes.

Pronoun and noun choice problem (Grammar problem type 12). 'Possessions' is incorrect word choice; likely 'sometimes' or 'occasionally'. The sentence needs an adverb to indicate frequency. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' or 'occasionally' to express frequency: 'You are with your parents partying for one hour sometimes.'

× Sometimes the patient don't have the motivation to do it, so I have to write an inquiries.

✓ Sometimes the parents don't have the motivation to do it, so I have to write inquiries.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice (Grammar problem types 6 and 1). 'Patient' likely should be 'parents' from context; if 'patient' is intended, then 'patients don't' is plural. Use 'don't' with plural subject. 'Write an inquiries' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'write inquiries' or 'write an inquiry.' Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree and match singular/plural forms: 'parents don't' and 'write inquiries.'

× Then sometimes it's made my job is harder so I have to be patient which.

✓ Sometimes that makes my job harder, so I have to be patient.

Awkward sentence structure and misplaced words (Grammar problem type 26). 'It's made my job is harder' is ungrammatical; use 'that makes my job harder.' Ending 'which' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Simplify to 'Sometimes that makes my job harder, so I have to be patient.'

× Yes, I'm not catching them whenever I try because I know how to handle the various situations.

✓ Yes, I don't get upset with them anymore because I know how to handle various situations.

Incorrect verb choice and tense/aspect (Grammar problem type 6). 'I'm not catching them' is unclear; likely 'I don't get angry' or 'I don't catch them' meant 'I don't get upset.' Use present simple for habitual states: 'I don't get upset.' Suggestion: Use clear verbs to express emotional reactions: 'I don't get upset with them anymore.'

× I know how to speak the problem in the persons or in the situation.

✓ I know how to talk about problems with people or about the situation.

Preposition and wording errors (Grammar problem type 11 and 13). 'Speak the problem in the persons' is ungrammatical; use 'talk about problems with people' or 'address problems with people.' Suggestion: Use 'talk about' or 'address' followed by 'with' or 'about' as appropriate: 'talk about problems with people or about the situation.'