Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on clear, correct sentences and relevant vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I am a patient person), then give one specific supporting example with simple, correct grammar. Use linking words like “for example” and avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., “present” → “patient”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I am a patient person. For example, when my children make a mess at home, I stay calm and ask them politely to help tidy up rather than getting angry.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear reason and one specific situation. Use correct vocabulary (impatient, queue/line) and linking words like “because” to explain why. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when I have to stand in long queues because I waste time and I often have other tasks to do. For instance, waiting an hour at the bank makes me feel stressed because I am busy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: state the feeling (bored, stressed) and give a concise reason or example. Do not repeat words; use linking words like “so” or “therefore.” Keep to two or three short sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually feel bored and stressed if I have to do the same task for a long time. For example, doing repetitive paperwork all day makes me lose focus and feel tired.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer then give a clear reason and one example. Use correct tense and vocabulary (requires, housewife, chores, calmly). Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires patience because I am a housewife and I often care for children and manage household chores. For example, calming an upset child or teaching them takes patience and careful attention.

Sugerencia: Compare past and present clearly. Use comparative structure (“more patient now than when I was a child”) and give a specific reason or short example (sharing toys). Avoid unclear phrases like “presence.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions. For instance, as a child I found it difficult to share my toys, but now I can calmly share and handle such situations.

× Yes, I am a present person because I can any situation handling some calm and very slowly.

✓ Yes, I am a patient person because I can handle any situation calmly and slowly.

The student used 'present' instead of the adjective 'patient' (word choice) and incorrect word order and forms: 'can any situation handling some calm and very slowly' is ungrammatical. Correct structure: modal + base verb 'can handle', object 'any situation', and adverbials 'calmly and slowly'. Use adverbs (calmly, slowly) to modify the verb. Suggestion: learn correct adjective 'patient' and place adverbs after the verb or at the end of the clause.

× For example, my children mess up in my mess up in my house, I I politely and kindly all are set up.

✓ For example, when my children make a mess in my house, I calmly and politely put everything back in order.

The original sentence repeats fragments and has wrong verb forms and word order ('mess up in my mess up in my house, I I politely and kindly all are set up'). Correct form: subordinate clause 'when my children make a mess', main clause 'I calmly and politely put everything back in order.' Use 'make a mess' for the noun phrase and place adverbs before the main verb or after it. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use clear subject-verb-object order, and choose correct collocations (make a mess, put in order).

× Well, many times I feel impressed because sometimes I are standing in a queue at that time.

✓ Well, many times I feel impatient because sometimes I am standing in a queue.

The student used 'impressed' instead of 'impatient' (wrong adjective) and incorrect verb form 'are' for first person. Use 'I am' with 'I' and correct adjective 'impatient' to express irritation while waiting. Suggestion: learn common adjectives for emotions and correct subject-verb pairing in present tense.

× I feel impassioned because I have I have turned.

✓ I feel impatient because I have to wait my turn.

The phrase 'impassioned' is not appropriate; 'impatient' is the intended adjective. 'I have I have turned' is ungrammatical and likely aims to say 'I have to wait my turn' or 'I have missed my turn.' Use 'have to' + base verb to show obligation and 'my turn' as object. Suggestion: practice using 'have to' for necessity and correct noun phrases like 'my turn'.

× I can't many wasting too much time on that line and I am a busy person so.

✓ I can't waste too much time standing in that line because I am a busy person.

'I can't many wasting' mixes words incorrectly. Use 'can't waste' (modal contraction + base verb) and place 'standing in that line' as the activity. 'So' at the end is unnecessary; connect clauses with 'because'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after modals and clear clause connectors.

× No, I, uh, I, I don't something do for a long time because uh, uh, at this time I, I, I, I feel bored because uh, uh, one task 11 task complete for many years, I, I'm very stressed and become very stressful.

✓ No, I don't do the same thing for a long time because I get bored; if one task continues for many years, I become very stressed.

The original sentence has disfluent repetitions and wrong word order 'I don't something do'. Correct English uses 'I don't do the same thing for a long time' and 'I get bored' for becoming bored. 'One task 11 task' seems to be a mistake meaning 'one task continues for many years'. Use 'if' to show condition and 'become stressed' to describe result. Suggestion: remove filler words, use clear collocations ('do the same thing', 'get bored', 'become stressed') and correct tense and clause structure.

× Yes, my job always required to be more patient because I am a housewife and I can do many house chores to calmly and presently.

✓ Yes, my job always requires me to be more patient because I am a housewife and I do many household chores calmly and patiently.

Errors: 'required to be' missing subject and tense; 'always requires me to be' is correct present tense with subject-verb agreement. 'House chores' should be 'household chores'. 'Calmly and presently' uses wrong adverb 'presently' (means soon) and wrong form; use 'calmly and patiently'. Suggestion: use present simple for routine jobs, correct collocations (requires me, household chores), and adverbs to modify verbs.

× So I think I am. I think I am a good good be patient person.

✓ So I think I am a patient person.

The phrase repeats and uses wrong word order 'good good be patient person'. Simplify to 'I think I am a patient person.' Use 'patient' as adjective after noun 'person' or before it. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use correct adjective placement.

× At the time I'm I'm more pleasant and when I was trying to I have no presence because that many toys in around and some some child came to my home and they play with my toys.

✓ At that time I was more patient, but when I was a child I had no patience because there were many toys around and other children came to my home and played with my toys.

Errors: 'more pleasant' is wrong adjective; likely 'more patient'. Tense and pronoun errors: use past simple 'I was', 'I had no patience'. 'There were many toys around' uses 'there were' for existence in past. 'Some child' should be 'other children' and 'played' is past tense. Suggestion: use appropriate past tense forms, 'there was/were' for existence, correct nouns ('patience') and pluralization for 'children'.

× So I can't question because because because I can't do share.

✓ So I couldn't share, so I couldn't join in or refuse to share my toys.

Original is unclear: 'I can't question' likely meant 'I couldn't share' or 'I couldn't cope'. Use past ability 'couldn't' and verb 'share'. Provide clearer phrasing like 'I couldn't share my toys' or 'I didn't want to share.' Suggestion: choose correct verbs to express the meaning and use past modal 'couldn't' for inability in the past.