Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "there inside the refrigerator" and incomplete sentences such as "not worrying about it getting. Spoiled." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it helps keep my food fresh for a longer time, which prevents spoilage and reduces waste.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question well, but watch for grammatical errors such as subject-verb agreement ('appliances helps' should be 'appliances help'). Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetitive phrases like 'in these times'.

Ejemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential nowadays because our busy schedules make it difficult to do chores manually. Therefore, these appliances help make our lives easier and more efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and redundancy. For example, 'I all I read' is unclear, and 'especially the ones which I'm using the first time' can be simplified. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instruction manual before using a new appliance, especially when it's my first time using it, to ensure I operate it correctly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'instruction' should be 'instructions') and by using more natural linking phrases instead of 'And'. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and make your points more concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because new products or updated versions often have features that users need to understand. It's always better to be safe than sorry.

× It's the most useful thing for me because I can keep my food there inside the refrigerator for a longer period of time and not worrying about it getting. Spoiled.

✓ It's the most useful thing for me because I can keep my food inside the refrigerator for a longer period of time and not worry about it getting spoiled.

The phrase 'not worrying' is incorrect here because it should be the base form 'not worry' after 'can' to express ability or possibility. Using the '-ing' form after 'can' is grammatically incorrect. Also, 'there inside the refrigerator' is redundant; 'inside the refrigerator' is sufficient.

× These appliances helps us in making our life smoother and easier.

✓ These appliances help us make our life smoother and easier.

The subject 'appliances' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to agree in number. Also, 'help us make' is more natural than 'help us in making'.

× I all I read the manual every time before using new appliances, especially the ones which I'm using the first time.

✓ I always read the manual every time before using new appliances, especially the ones which I'm using for the first time.

The phrase 'I all I' is incorrect and should be 'I always'. Also, 'using the first time' is missing the preposition 'for' to indicate the first occasion of use.

× I always read the instruction manual then use it accordingly.

✓ I always read the instruction manual and then use it accordingly.

The sentence is missing a conjunction 'and' to connect the two actions properly. Also, 'instruction manual' is correct with the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific manual.

× I believe it is very important to read the instruction before using it, because sometimes new products or new edited version of the same appliances have new features which we should learn by reading the instruction.

✓ I believe it is very important to read the instructions before using it, because sometimes new products or new edited versions of the same appliances have new features which we should learn by reading the instructions.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to the set of guidelines or directions. Also, 'new edited version' should be plural 'new edited versions' to agree with 'products' and 'appliances'.