Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时句子结构有些不够自然，且存在语法错误，如“and such as reading books and watch TV”应改为“such as reading books and watching TV”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意动词形式的一致性。

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time by doing the laundry for me. This allows me to spend more time on my hobbies, such as reading books and watching TV.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“Even we are busy about”不完整且不自然。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I totally agree that washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they are very convenient and save a lot of time. Even when we are busy, these machines can help us finish household chores efficiently.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“if there is really a difficult that I couldn't solve, I will”未完成句子。建议使用完整句子，注意冠词和词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't read the instructions because most machines are easy to use and have a similar logic. I try to operate them myself first, and if I encounter any difficulties, then I read the manual.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，如“lots of function”应为“lots of functions”，“if we not read instructions”应为“if we do not read the instructions”。建议注意复数形式和完整句子结构。

Ejemplo: Although I don't usually read the instructions, I believe it is important because machines have many functions designed by the manufacturers that we might miss if we don't read the manual.

× It helps me save a lot of time so that I can enjoy my hobbies and such as reading books and watch TV.

✓ It helps me save a lot of time so that I can enjoy my hobbies such as reading books and watching TV.

在列举爱好时，'such as'后面应直接跟名词或动名词形式，且并列动词需保持形式一致，故将'watch'改为'watching'。

× Yes, I totally agree on it.

✓ Yes, I totally agree with it.

动词'agree'后应接介词'with'表示同意某事，'agree on'用法不当。

× They can finish the household chores at any time. Even we are busy about.

✓ They can finish the household chores at any time, even when we are busy.

原句中'Even we are busy about'结构不完整，缺少连词和正确介词，需改为'even when we are busy'使句子完整通顺。

× No, I don't, because most machines are very easy to understand how to use.

✓ No, I don't, because most machines are very easy to understand how to use them.

句中缺少宾语'them'，导致句子不完整，需补充宾语以明确指代。

× They share a same underlying logic.

✓ They share the same underlying logic.

'same'前应使用定冠词'the'，而非不定冠词'a'，这是固定搭配。

× So I will try to use it at first on my own at 1st and if there is really a difficult that I couldn't solve, I will.

✓ So I will try to use it on my own at first, and if there is really a difficulty that I can't solve, I will ask for help.

句子结构混乱，'at first'位置不当，'difficult'应为名词'difficulty'，且句尾不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Well, although I don't read it, I believe this action is meaningful because there are lots of function in the machines that are designed by the designers.

✓ Well, although I don't read it, I believe this action is meaningful because there are lots of functions in the machines that are designed by the designers.

'function'应使用复数形式'functions'，因为表示多个功能。

× We can't find it if we not read instructions.

✓ We can't find it if we do not read the instructions.

缺少助动词'do'构成否定句，且'instructions'前应加定冠词'the'，使句子语法正确。