Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas like 'user friendly' and 'convenient' without elaboration. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is my sewing machine because it allows me to easily make and repair clothes by myself. Moreover, it is portable, so I can carry it with me when needed, which makes it very convenient.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct grammar, such as 'easier' instead of 'more easier', and avoid repeating similar points. Use linking words like 'especially' to clarify your ideas and make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important at home because they make our work easier. Especially, washing machines save us a lot of time since we don't have to wash clothes manually.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use plural 'instructions' and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words like 'for example' properly to connect ideas. Try to make sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because I am not familiar with how to operate it. For example, when I bought a sewing machine, I read the instructions carefully before starting to use it.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys the idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct expressions like 'whether we are doing it correctly or not'. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow with linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions to ensure we are using the machine correctly. Otherwise, we might make mistakes that could cause the machine to malfunction.

× My favorite machine is my sewing machine because I can easily, uh, sew my clothes by my own at home.

✓ My favorite machine is my sewing machine because I can easily, uh, sew my clothes by myself at home.

The phrase 'by my own' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun here is 'by myself' to indicate doing something without help.

× Yes, I believe these are very essential at homes because it makes our work more easier and washing machine specially we don't have to wash our clothes by our own.

✓ Yes, I believe these are very essential at homes because they make our work easier and especially with washing machines, we don't have to wash our clothes by ourselves.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already implies comparison; 'more' is redundant. Also, 'washing machine specially' is awkward; 'especially with washing machines' is correct. 'By our own' should be 'by ourselves' as a reflexive pronoun.

× Yes, I believe these are very essential at homes because it makes our work more easier and washing machine specially we don't have to wash our clothes by our own.

✓ Yes, I believe these are very essential at homes because they make our work easier and especially with washing machines, we don't have to wash our clothes by ourselves.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to plural 'these'; it should be 'they' to agree in number.

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using the machine if the product is new because I don't know how to operate it.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using the machine if the product is new because I don't know how to operate it.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× For example, I bought a sewing machine and I had read the instruction, then I have started using it.

✓ For example, I bought a sewing machine and I read the instructions, then I started using it.

The past perfect 'had read' and present perfect 'have started' are incorrect here; simple past 'read' and 'started' are appropriate to describe completed past actions in sequence.

× For example, I bought a sewing machine and I had read the instruction, then I have started using it.

✓ For example, I bought a sewing machine and I read the instructions, then I started using it.

As before, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× Yes, I believe it is very essential to read the instructions if we are doing it correct or not because we can make mistakes while using it and it may go wrong.

✓ Yes, I believe it is very essential to read the instructions to know if we are doing it correctly or not because we can make mistakes while using it and it may go wrong.

The phrase 'if we are doing it correct or not' is incorrect; 'correct' should be the adverb 'correctly' to modify the verb 'doing'.

× Yes, I believe it is very essential to read the instructions if we are doing it correct or not because we can make mistakes while using it and it may go wrong.

✓ Yes, I believe it is very essential to read the instructions to know if we are doing it correctly or not because we can make mistakes while using it and it may go wrong.

The sentence structure is improved by adding 'to know' to clarify the purpose of reading instructions.

× So I prefer reading would be very essential and beneficial.

✓ So I think reading them would be very essential and beneficial.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete; adding 'I think' and 'them' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.