Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Та хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос ашиглан, илүү байгалийн хэллэгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "My favourite machine at home is my dad's black car because it is very convenient and has a special structure that helps it handle difficult roads well."

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is my dad's black car because it is very convenient. Moreover, it has a special design that allows it to handle rough roads easily.

Sugerencia: Хариултаа илүү цэгцтэй, холбоос үг ашиглан, илүү тодорхой жишээ оруулах хэрэгтэй. Мөн илүү байгалийн хэллэг ашиглахыг зөвлөж байна.

Ejemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time. For example, without them, we would have to wash dirty clothes by hand, which is very tiring.

Sugerencia: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, грамматик алдааг засаж, холбоос үг ашиглан илүү байгалийн хэллэгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because without knowing how to use it properly, I cannot operate it. Therefore, reading the manual is essential, especially for new machines with advanced technology.

Sugerencia: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, грамматик алдааг засаж, холбоос үг ашиглан илүү логик, байгалийн хэллэгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important. However, sometimes I prefer asking a chatbot because it can save time and provide detailed information about how to use the machine.

× And because the car is very convenient and had a very special structure to dealing with the roads, that's really hard.

✓ And because the car is very convenient and has a very special structure for dealing with the roads, which are really hard.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'had' with present tense 'is'. The verb should be in present tense 'has' to agree with 'car' which is currently being described. Also, 'to dealing' is incorrect; it should be 'for dealing' to correctly express purpose.

× if if they didn't exist, we really had to dealing with The Dirty clothes by our hands.

✓ if they didn't exist, we would really have to deal with the dirty clothes by our hands.

The phrase 'had to dealing' is incorrect; after 'have to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'deal' instead of 'dealing'. Also, 'The Dirty clothes' should be 'the dirty clothes' with lowercase letters.

× Yes, undoubtedly they're very special for our lives because they are really helpful and actually saving our time really well.

✓ Yes, undoubtedly they're very special for our lives because they are really helpful and actually save our time very well.

The phrase 'actually saving' is incorrect here; it should be 'actually save' to match the present simple tense used for general truths. Also, 'really well' is better expressed as 'very well' for clarity.

× without knowing the exactly how to use machine then I can do nothing.

✓ without knowing exactly how to use the machine, I can do nothing.

The phrase 'the exactly how' is incorrect; 'exactly' should come before 'how' without 'the'. Also, 'use machine' needs the definite article 'the' before 'machine'.

× So reading, reading the structure is very essential to use new machines like brand new brand new techniques.

✓ So reading the instructions is very essential to use new machines with brand new techniques.

'Reading the structure' is unclear; 'instructions' is more appropriate. Also, 'like brand new brand new techniques' is repetitive and awkward; 'with brand new techniques' is clearer.

× it's very essential, but sometimes I would prefer asking for chatty buddy about that and that might be save more time and giving us a more detailed information about that machine have to use.

✓ it's very essential, but sometimes I would prefer asking a chatty buddy about that, and that might save more time and give us more detailed information about how to use that machine.

'Asking for chatty buddy' is incorrect; it should be 'asking a chatty buddy'. 'Might be save' should be 'might save'. 'Giving us a more detailed information' should be 'give us more detailed information'. Also, 'that machine have to use' should be 'how to use that machine'.