Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and unclear phrasing. Try to be more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, clarify your points with better structure and linking words.

Ejemplo: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me time by cleaning the dishes more efficiently than I can. Additionally, it allows me to focus on other tasks while it does the cleaning.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words, and provide more specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe both washing and sweeping machines are important because they help keep the home clean and comfortable. Moreover, they save a lot of time compared to cleaning manually, which makes household chores easier.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid repetition. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because I am not an engineer and may not know how to operate it properly. Reading the instructions helps me avoid mistakes and use the functions correctly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more fluent. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I think reading instructions is very important because machines often have specific warnings and functions that are not obvious. Without reading them, it can be difficult to use the machine correctly and safely.

× My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it saves my time to wash the dishes and it also wash the dishes clean more than me.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it saves me time washing the clothes and it also washes the clothes cleaner than I do.

The word 'dishes' is incorrect here because washing machines are used for clothes, not dishes. Also, 'wash' should be 'washes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'saves my time to wash' is awkward; 'saves me time washing' is more natural.

× it also wash the dishes clean more than me.

✓ it also washes the clothes cleaner than I do.

The verb 'wash' should be 'washes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in the third person singular form.

× You can replace me to do uh, cleaning and also, uh.

✓ It can replace me to do the cleaning and so on.

The pronoun 'You' is incorrect here because the student is talking about the machine's function, so 'It' is appropriate. Also, 'replace me to do' is awkward; 'replace me in doing' or 'replace me to do' can be improved to 'replace me to do the cleaning'.

× Yes, I think both of them are important because they are very useful to tidy up the the home and make the home feel better.

✓ Yes, I think both of them are important because they are very useful to tidy up the home and make it feel better.

The phrase 'the the home' has a repeated article; it should be 'the home'. Also, 'make the home feel better' can be simplified to 'make it feel better' to avoid repetition.

× Also it's a very uh, useful and saving time better than I manually to do the cleaning job.

✓ Also, it's very useful and saves time better than when I do the cleaning manually.

The sentence has awkward structure and incorrect pronoun use. 'Saving time better than I manually to do' is incorrect; it should be 'saves time better than when I do the cleaning manually'.

× Yes, I will read the info uh instruction clearly before I use the machine, because actually I'm not very good at using using the machine 'cause I'm not like studying the engineering, so I can directly use it.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions clearly before I use the machine because I'm not very good at using machines since I don't study engineering, so I can't use it directly.

The use of 'will' is unnecessary here; present simple 'read' is better for habitual actions. Also, 'I'm not like studying the engineering' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't study engineering'. 'Can directly use it' should be 'can't use it directly' to express inability.

× I will read it very clear, like something I need to avoid it or I have to use the functions clear.

✓ I will read it very clearly, like things I need to avoid or functions I have to use clearly.

'Clear' should be the adverb 'clearly' to modify 'read'. Also, 'something I need to avoid it' is redundant; 'something' and 'it' together are incorrect. It should be 'things I need to avoid'. Similarly, 'use the functions clear' should be 'use the functions clearly'.

× I think it's very important to read the instruction 'cause there are some specific, uh, warning or function.

✓ I think it's very important to read the instructions because there are some specific warnings or functions.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'warning' and 'function' should be plural to match 'some'.

× It's hard to directly, uh, to use, or can be uh, realized when I directly use the machine, so the instruction can provide the useful information for this.

✓ It's hard to use the machine directly or realize some things when I use it directly, so the instructions provide useful information for this.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Hard to directly, uh, to use' is incorrect structure; it should be 'hard to use the machine directly'. 'Can be realized' is better than 'can be uh, realized'. Also, 'the instruction can provide the useful information for this' should be 'the instructions provide useful information for this'.