Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid confusing phrases such as 'I have to use the IT'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because I dislike washing dishes by hand. It saves me a lot of time after lunch and dinner. Unfortunately, it broke down yesterday, which was quite inconvenient.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation sounds and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use more precise vocabulary and correct phrases, for example, 'washing machine helps to clean clothes and dishes' is incorrect; washing machines clean clothes, dishwashers clean dishes. Also, use linking words like 'for example' properly and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they make household chores easier. For example, washing machines clean clothes efficiently, and vacuum cleaners help keep the house tidy.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words to improve fluency. Use correct vocabulary ('machine' instead of 'mansion' or 'matching', 'instructions' instead of 'instructor'). Structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always try to read the instructions before using a machine because each one operates differently. For instance, when I bought a new car last year, I carefully read the manual to understand how to use it properly.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use correct vocabulary ('machine' instead of 'matching', 'instructions' plural). Provide specific reasons and examples with linking words to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, reading instructions is very important because it helps us understand how to use a machine correctly. For example, when I bought a car last year, reading the manual allowed me to operate it safely and efficiently.

× OK, actually I like the uh, uh, dishwashing matching because I don't like, uh, washing dishes.

✓ OK, actually I like the uh, uh, dishwashing machine because I don't like, uh, washing dishes.

The word 'matching' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'machine' to refer to the appliance used for washing dishes.

× So, uh, it's my favorite one.

✓ So, uh, it's my favorite one.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Umm, after that, uh, lunch, dinner, I have to use the IT, it's my favorite one.

✓ Umm, after that, uh, lunch or dinner, I have to use it; it's my favorite one.

The phrase 'the IT' is incorrect; 'it' should be lowercase and without 'the'. Also, 'lunch, dinner' should be connected with 'or' for clarity.

× Yesterday it was broken.

✓ Yesterday it broke.

The phrase 'was broken' is passive and less natural here; 'it broke' is the correct active past tense form to indicate the machine stopped working.

× Actually, yes, absolutely yes. Because uh, they help us, uh, they help us for everything.

✓ Actually, yes, absolutely yes. Because, uh, they help us with everything.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'help us with everything' is the correct phrase.

× For example, washing machine can help, uh, the wash deck closes, dishes and sweeping machines are uh, keep the house clean.

✓ For example, washing machines can help wash clothes and dishes, and sweeping machines help keep the house clean.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'wash deck closes' is incorrect and should be 'wash clothes'; 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match context; 'are uh, keep' is incorrect and should be 'help keep'.

× They are so important.

✓ They are so important.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× To tell the truth, yes, uh, I, I, I always try to read the instructions before using a mansion because uh, uh, every, every matching has the different instructions, so uh, should the uh, instruction.

✓ To tell the truth, yes, uh, I always try to read the instructions before using a machine because, uh, every machine has different instructions, so you should read the instructions.

Several errors: 'mansion' is incorrect, should be 'machine'; 'matching' is incorrect, should be 'machine'; 'has the different instructions' should be 'has different instructions'; 'should the uh, instruction' is incomplete and corrected to 'you should read the instructions'.

× Uh, last year I bought a new car and I read the instructor.

✓ Uh, last year I bought a new car and I read the instructions.

'Instructor' is incorrect; the correct word is 'instructions' referring to the manual or guidelines.

× Yes, actually it helps us to, to understand easily.

✓ Yes, actually it helps us to understand easily.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× It helps to understand the matching easily and uh, if you don't read the instruction, you don't know how to use it.

✓ It helps to understand the machine easily and, uh, if you don't read the instructions, you don't know how to use it.

'Matching' is incorrect; should be 'machine'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× So, uh, instruction is more important.

✓ So, uh, instructions are more important.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and verb agreement changes to 'are'.

× Last year I bought a car and I uh, read the instruction and then I can use it.

✓ Last year I bought a car and I read the instructions and then I could use it.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'can' should be past tense 'could' to match 'last year' context.