Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the machine, give one or two specific reasons using linking words, and avoid redundancy. Pay attention to verb forms and word order (e.g., 'air conditioner' and 'gives relief' or 'is relieving').

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. I use it a lot in summer because it cools the room quickly and improves air quality, which helps me sleep better. Besides, it reduces humidity, so the house feels more comfortable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words. Finish your supporting idea so it is a complete thought (e.g., explain why washing machines are preferred).

Ejemplo: Yes, I think both are important because they save time and reduce physical effort. However, many middle-class families can only afford one, and they often choose a washing machine because it saves them labor and allows clothes to be cleaned quickly, especially in cold weather.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and use a clear present tense structure. State a topic sentence ('Yes, I always read instructions for new devices') and give one or two specific reasons. Remove repetitions and improve grammar (e.g., 'I read the instructions because technology changes and I may not know how to operate new features').

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions when I get a new machine. Because technology changes quickly, the manual helps me understand features and operate the device safely, which prevents mistakes or damage.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and complete your supporting points. Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'therefore') and provide a specific outcome (e.g., 'avoid accidents' or 'extend device life'). Avoid fillers and unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: Definitely — reading instructions is important because it helps users understand how to use new technology. For example, following the manual can prevent accidents and help you maintain the machine properly, so it lasts longer.

× At my back home all the machines are my favorite but I usually use AC during summer so air condition is the favorite machine at my home because it provides a fresh air as well as it has to do relief from.

✓ At my home, all the machines are my favorites, but I usually use the AC during summer, so the air conditioner is my favorite machine because it provides fresh air and gives relief from the heat.

Errors: incorrect or missing articles ('At my back home' -> 'At my home'; 'AC' should be 'the AC'; 'air condition' -> 'air conditioner'; 'a fresh air' -> 'fresh air'); awkward phrase 'has to do relief from' -> 'gives relief from the heat'. Suggestion: use 'the' with specific items, use proper noun forms ('air conditioner'), omit unnecessary 'a' with uncountable nouns like 'air', and use natural verb phrases such as 'gives relief from'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× From my perspective, washing machine and sweeping machines plays an important role in human beings life.

✓ From my perspective, washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in human beings' lives.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and number. The compound plural subject 'washing machines and sweeping machines' requires plural verb 'play', not 'plays'. Also 'human beings life' needs plural possessive 'human beings' lives'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and use possessive for 'lives'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× But umm, many of the middle class families did not afford uh like both machines.

✓ But many middle-class families cannot afford both machines.

Errors: tense and modal ('did not afford' is incorrect; should use 'cannot afford' or 'could not afford' depending on meaning), hyphenation 'middle-class', unnecessary filler words. Suggestion: use 'cannot afford' to express inability in general present, and hyphenate compound adjectives. Grammar problem type ID:22

× They usually prefer washing machines because it is more worth it as well as important because during the cold nights they can easily.

✓ They usually prefer washing machines because they are more worthwhile and important, especially because they can warm clothes easily during cold nights.

Errors: pronoun/number mismatch ('it' should be 'they' for 'washing machines'), awkward adjective 'more worth it' -> 'more worthwhile', sentence fragment 'they can easily' lacks object and verb. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number, use natural adjectives, and complete the clause with the intended action ('warm clothes'). Grammar problem type ID:13

× Of course whenever I using the new machines that are my read instructions because technology is increasing day by day and all the machines are being developed so sometimes I do not have much knowledge how to use.

✓ Of course, whenever I use new machines, I read the instructions because technology is improving day by day and machines are constantly being developed, so sometimes I do not know how to use them.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'I using' should be 'I use'; awkward clause 'that are my read instructions' restructured to 'I read the instructions'; 'do not have much knowledge how to use' -> 'do not know how to use them'. Suggestion: use base verb after 'whenever' for habitual actions, and include object pronoun for 'use'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So instruction also helps me to the way also helps me to.

✓ Instructions also help me by showing the proper way to use the machine.

Errors: sentence fragments and repetition; incorrect verb forms 'helps me to the way also helps me to'. Suggestion: combine idea into one clear sentence, use plural 'instructions' and 'help' with plural subject, and include 'by' to indicate method. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Definitely read instructions is very important because sometimes we do not have much knowledge about the new technology.

✓ Definitely, reading instructions is very important because sometimes we do not have much knowledge about new technology.

Errors: incorrect word order and form 'read instructions is' should be gerund 'reading instructions is'; unnecessary article 'the' before 'new technology'. Suggestion: use gerund as subject and omit 'the' before uncountable general nouns. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So if we can read the instructions, it is very, uh, worth it for us.

✓ So if we read the instructions, it is very worthwhile for us.

Errors: modal/auxiliary misuse 'if we can read' implies ability rather than condition; filler 'uh' and awkward 'worth it'. Suggestion: use simple conditional 'if we read' to state a general truth and use 'worthwhile' as adjective. Grammar problem type ID:26

× We can easily use the machines and we can easily, uh, protect from any kind of.

✓ We can easily use the machines and protect ourselves from any kind of harm.

Errors: sentence fragment ending with 'any kind of' without object, missing reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' for protection, filler 'uh'. Suggestion: complete the object after 'any kind of' (e.g., 'harm' or 'accident') and use 'protect ourselves'. Grammar problem type ID:26}]}{