Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "better than better" is incorrect and should be corrected. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. In English (Nepal), you can say: "Tapai ko uttar spashta cha tara kehi byakaran ko galti haru ra thap jankari ko lagi linking words ko prayog garnu parcha."

Ejemplo: I'm good at memorizing things when the information is visually presented, such as through charts or diagrams. Moreover, if the topic is discussed fluently, I find it easier to remember. However, if the subject is unfamiliar or uninteresting, I struggle to retain the information. For example, I remember facts better when I see pictures.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like "missed a day or I missed a chance or to get a good grade." Try to be more precise and use linking words to improve coherence. In English (Nepal), you can say: "Tapai ko uttar ma kehi byakaran ko galti ra aspaṣṭa vakya haru chan, jasle arth ma aspaṣṭata aauchha. Linking words ko prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau."

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. When I was in grade 11, my teacher assigned a project to be submitted after two weeks. Although I finished the project on time, I accidentally forgot to bring it on the submission day. As a result, I was very disappointed because I missed the chance to get a good grade.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. For example, "may hinders" should be "may hinder" and "similar mistake" should be "similar mistakes." Also, avoid filler words like "uh." Use linking words to connect ideas. In English (Nepal), you can say: "Tapai ko uttar ma kehi byakaran ko galti ra anawasyak shabda chan, jasle uttar ko prabhav kam garna sakcha. Linking words ko prayog garnu parcha."

Ejemplo: From my perspective, in daily life, I need to remember how to organize and manage things. For example, when I was in grade 11, I forgot to bring my project on time, which may have hindered my grade. Therefore, to avoid similar mistakes in the future, I always check my belongings before going to school.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition like "technical technical" and some awkward phrasing. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words for coherence. In English (Nepal), you can say: "Tapai ko uttar ma shabda ko punaravritti ra aspaṣṭa vakya chan, jasle uttar ko prabhav kam garna sakcha. Linking words ko prayog garnu parcha."

Ejemplo: Previously, I used to remember important things by writing notes or using a calendar. However, recently, due to technological advancements, I have started using my phone's note app, which helps me check details frequently and organize information more effectively.

× I'm good at memorizing things when the information is visually presented, such as through chart or diagrams, or when it is discussed fluently.

✓ I'm good at memorizing things when the information is visually presented, such as through charts or diagrams, or when it is discussed fluently.

The phrase 'through chart or diagrams' is incorrect because 'chart' is singular and missing an article, and 'diagrams' is plural. It should be 'charts or diagrams' to correctly refer to multiple visual aids without an article. This is an issue of article usage and pluralization.

× For example, I remember the facts better than better when I see the picture.

✓ For example, I remember the facts better when I see the picture.

The phrase 'better than better' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is simply 'better' to express improved memory. This is an error in the use of adverbs.

× Although I already finished the project on the time, I accidentally forgot to bring it on the day of submission, which made me very disappointed because I missed a day or I missed a chance or to get a good grade.

✓ Although I already finished the project on time, I accidentally forgot to bring it on the day of submission, which made me very disappointed because I missed a chance to get a good grade.

The phrase 'on the time' is incorrect; it should be 'on time'. Also, 'missed a day or I missed a chance or to get a good grade' is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper past tense forms.

× From my perspective, in our daily life, I need to remember how to organize things and manage it.

✓ From my perspective, in our daily lives, I need to remember how to organize things and manage them.

The phrase 'in our daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' to refer to multiple people's daily routines. Also, 'manage it' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so it should be 'manage them'. This is an issue of preposition and pronoun agreement.

× Because when I was in grade 11, uh, I forgot to bring up my project on time which may hinders my grade.

✓ Because when I was in grade 11, uh, I forgot to bring my project on time which may have hindered my grade.

The phrase 'bring up my project' is incorrect; 'bring' is sufficient. Also, 'may hinders' is incorrect because 'may' should be followed by the base verb 'hinder'. The past event requires 'may have hindered' to express possibility in the past.

× So to avoid similar mistake in future, I need to check my belongings before going to school.

✓ So to avoid similar mistakes in the future, I need to check my belongings before going to school.

The phrase 'similar mistake' should be plural 'similar mistakes' because it refers to any such mistakes. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct.

× Before, I used to remember important things by writing on the notes or calendar.

✓ Before, I used to remember important things by writing on notes or the calendar.

The phrase 'writing on the notes or calendar' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural and should not have 'the' unless specific notes are meant. Also, 'calendar' should have 'the' if referring to a specific calendar. This is an issue of preposition and article usage.

× Recently, due to the technical technical advancement, I started writing on my phone notes, which helps me to look every time and remember the detail more clearly and help me to organize it more effectively.

✓ Recently, due to technical advancements, I started writing notes on my phone, which helps me to look at them every time, remember the details more clearly, and helps me to organize them more effectively.

The phrase 'technical technical advancement' is a repetition error. 'Writing on my phone notes' is awkward; 'writing notes on my phone' is better. Also, 'helps me to look every time' is incomplete; it should be 'look at them every time'. 'Remember the detail' should be plural 'details'. The sentence also needs parallel structure in the last part. These are errors in adjective use, word order, and sentence structure.