Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, say "I'm not good at memorizing things because I often forget my keys and wallet when I go out." This is more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget my keys and wallet when I leave the house.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Avoid repeating the same idea and try to complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I often forget my motorbike keys, so I use a smart code with pictures to unlock it."

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget my motorbike keys, so I use a smart code with pictures to unlock it.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example, "It depends on the situation. If I need to buy groceries, I write a shopping list. For daily tasks, I use my phone to take notes."

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I need to buy groceries, I write a shopping list. For daily tasks, I use my phone to take notes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "To remember important things like assignments, I set alarms a few days before the deadline. This helps me stay on track."

Ejemplo: To remember important things like assignments, I set alarms a few days before the deadline. This helps me stay on track.

× I would like to say I'm not a good persons who good at memorizing things since I always forgot my keys, my wallet at home when I went out.

✓ I would like to say I'm not a good person who is good at memorizing things since I always forget my keys and my wallet at home when I go out.

The word 'persons' should be singular 'person' because it refers to the speaker. Also, 'good' needs the verb 'is' to form 'who is good'. The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' to match habitual action. 'Went' should be 'go' to indicate present habitual action. Also, 'and' is needed to connect 'keys' and 'my wallet'.

× I always forgot my keys, my wallet at home when I went out.

✓ I always forget my keys and my wallet at home when I go out.

The phrase describes a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' and 'go' should be used instead of past tense 'forgot' and 'went'.

× Of course, as I mentioned on the previous, I always forgot my keys.

✓ Of course, as I mentioned previously, I always forget my keys.

'Mentioned' is correct in past tense because it refers to a past action, but 'on the previous' is incorrect; 'previously' is better. 'Always forgot' should be 'always forget' to indicate habitual action.

× I always forget my keys, my I would like to say my motorbike keys.

✓ I always forget my keys, I would like to say my motorbike keys.

The phrase 'my I would like to say' is incorrect; it should be separated properly. Also, 'keys' is plural and correct here.

× So I always have to use a smart code from the keys which is a pictures to open my.

✓ So I always have to use a smart code from the keys, which is a picture, to open my motorbike.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Pictures' should be singular 'picture' to match 'a'. Also, 'my' is incomplete and needs the object 'motorbike' to complete the meaning.

× It depend on the situations.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Depend' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'It'. Also, 'situations' can be singular 'situation' for general meaning.

× If I have to note, uh, some kind of things to buy for the groceries, I would like to take a note,

✓ If I have to note some things to buy for groceries, I would like to take a note,

The phrase 'note, uh, some kind of things' is awkward; 'some things' is better. 'For the groceries' should be 'for groceries' as 'groceries' is uncountable here.

× but if I have to do something for the daily routine, I would note it in my phones.

✓ but if I have to do something for my daily routine, I would note it in my phone.

'The daily routine' should be 'my daily routine' to specify possession. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' unless the speaker has multiple phones.

× I'm glad you say I will give you a exam.

✓ I'm glad you said that; I will give you an exam.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'You say' should be 'you said that' to refer to past speech. 'A exam' should be 'an exam' because 'exam' starts with a vowel sound.

× An example of the important thing that is my assignment.

✓ An example of an important thing is my assignment.

'The important thing' should be 'an important thing' because it is a general example, not a specific known thing.

× I would like to say I will put an alarm before the deadline three days or four days, maybe a week.

✓ I would like to say I will set an alarm three or four days, maybe a week, before the deadline.

'Put an alarm' is less natural than 'set an alarm'. The time expression should be placed before 'the deadline' for clarity.

× So when the deadline is coming, it's will allow me.

✓ So when the deadline is coming, it will alert me.

'It's will' is incorrect; it should be 'it will'. Also, 'allow me' is incorrect in this context; 'alert me' or 'remind me' is appropriate.