Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. My friends often say that I have a bad memory because I forget daily tasks and sometimes even their names.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'birth birthday'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things like my mother's birthday. Because I have a poor memory, someone usually reminds me before important events.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my school schedule and some routines, such as waking up at 6:00 AM and going to bed around 10:00 PM.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời tốt hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually write important things in the notes app on my smartphone because I always carry it with me. When I forget something, I check my notes to remind myself.

× No, my friends always told me that I am upset mind because I always forget everything's like just a daily and sometime I forgot their names.

✓ No, my friends always told me that I have an upset mind because I always forget everything, like just daily things, and sometimes I forget their names.

The phrase 'upset mind' should be 'have an upset mind' to correctly express possession. 'Everything's like just a daily' is incorrect; it should be 'everything, like just daily things' to clarify meaning. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I forgot' should be 'I forget' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, sometime it's my mother birth birthday.

✓ Yes, sometimes I forget my mother's birthday.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'It's my mother birth birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'I forget my mother's birthday' to correctly express the action and possessive form.

× Umm I would say that I really bad at memorizing so before an important event someone have to told me so that I can remind and do that.

✓ Umm, I would say that I am really bad at memorizing, so before an important event, someone has to tell me so that I can be reminded and do it.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'Someone have to told me' is incorrect; it should be 'someone has to tell me' to use the correct modal verb and tense. 'I can remind and do that' should be 'I can be reminded and do it' for clarity and correct passive form.

× I think that is my schedule in school and also is some daily activities like wake up early at 6:00 AM and go to the bed at around 10:00 PM.

✓ I think that it is my schedule at school and also some daily activities like waking up early at 6:00 AM and going to bed at around 10:00 PM.

'Is some daily activities' should be 'also some daily activities' without 'is' to agree with plural 'activities'. 'Wake up' and 'go to the bed' should be in gerund form 'waking up' and 'going to bed' to correctly describe habitual actions.

× That is all the thing that I have to remember in a day.

✓ Those are all the things that I have to remember in a day.

'That is' should be 'Those are' to agree with plural 'things'. 'The thing' should be 'the things' to match the plural context.

× Umm, in my opinion, I always list in my notes on my smartphone because I always bring that outside.

✓ Umm, in my opinion, I always make a list in my notes on my smartphone because I always bring it outside.

'List' is a noun here, so 'make a list' is correct. 'Bring that outside' should be 'bring it outside' to correctly use the pronoun referring to the smartphone.

× So when I forgot something, I will open to look, look for it and research some information that I forgot.

✓ So when I forget something, I will open it to look for it and research some information that I forgot.

'When I forgot' should be 'when I forget' to maintain present tense for habitual action. 'Open to look' should be 'open it to look for' to include the object and correct preposition.

× So it is one of the useful thing that I usually do to remind.

✓ So it is one of the useful things that I usually do to remind myself.

'One of the useful thing' should be 'one of the useful things' to agree with plural 'things'. Adding 'myself' clarifies the reflexive action of reminding.