Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest and clear, but try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, 'I just gets out of my mind' should be 'it just gets out of my mind'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'goes goes'. Try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Whenever I try, the information quickly slips from my mind, and I often forget it.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and includes a personal example, which is good. However, improve sentence structure and clarity. For example, 'after coming back in front of door' is unclear; say 'when I returned home'. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'So it'.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my keys at home when I went to work. When I came back, I realized I couldn't enter the house, which was very frustrating.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' and improve sentence coherence. Also, the first sentence is unclear ('Where there are several things'). Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: There are several things I need to remember daily. Because of my busy schedule, I must keep track of my work hours and meetings, so I maintain a list to help me.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good strategies, but improve grammar and sentence flow. For example, 'my phones notes' should be 'my phone's notes'. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your points with linking words.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by writing them in my notebook or To-Do List. Sometimes, I use my phone's notes app because it's more accessible, and I rarely forget my phone.

× Well whenever I tend to memorize something I just gets out of my mind so easily and my mind goes goes blank trying to remember it.

✓ Well whenever I tend to memorize something it just gets out of my mind so easily and my mind goes blank trying to remember it.

The subject 'it' (referring to the thing memorized) requires the verb 'gets' in third person singular form. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I just gets' which is a subject-verb agreement error. Also, the repeated word 'goes' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'goes'.

× So reminiscing stuff is usually difficult for me.

✓ So remembering stuff is usually difficult for me.

The verb 'reminiscing' means recalling past experiences, which is not appropriate here. The intended meaning is 'remembering' or 'memorizing' things. Using 'reminiscing' is a misuse of the verb, which affects clarity.

× So it I found out that I had left the keys at home when I was leaving the house.

✓ So I found out that I had left the keys at home when I was leaving the house.

The phrase 'So it I found out' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct structure is simply 'So I found out'. The extra 'it' causes confusion and breaks sentence structure.

× Where there are several things that I have to remember on a daily basis.

✓ There are several things that I have to remember on a daily basis.

The sentence begins with 'Where' which is incorrect here. The correct sentence should start with 'There' to indicate existence. The original sentence is a sentence fragment and lacks proper structure.

× after coming back in front of door I was searching for my keys and my wallet.

✓ after coming back in front of the door I was searching for my keys and my wallet.

The phrase 'in front of door' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'door'. Prepositions require correct article usage to specify the noun properly.

× I just write them my phones notes that is quite more accessible and I don't forget my phone going anywhere hopefully.

✓ I just write them in my phone's notes; that is quite more accessible and I don't forget my phone going anywhere hopefully.

The phrase 'write them my phones notes' is missing the preposition 'in' and the possessive apostrophe in 'phone's'. Correct preposition and possessive form are necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.