Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid informal phrases like 'goldfish memory' which may confuse the examiner. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clearer explanation.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I tend to forget information quickly, so I usually write important details down to help me remember and stay organised.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. Try to be more specific about the situation and the consequences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot about an exam and almost woke up late. Fortunately, I took a bus quickly to get to school on time and managed to complete the exam without being absent.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers relevant points but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Try to be more specific about each item you need to remember.

Ejemplo: I need to remember several things daily, such as my study plan, travel schedules, and career goals. These help me stay organised and focused on both my short-term tasks and long-term plans.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about the methods you use.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by writing them down and using various apps on my phone. This helps me organise my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× I have a goldfish memory and I always forget things after memorizing it, so I have to mark it down to ensure that I am doing great and follow the procedures.

✓ I have a goldfish memory and I always forget things after memorizing them, so I have to mark them down to ensure that I am doing great and following the procedures.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so 'them' should be used instead. Also, 'follow' should be in the '-ing' form 'following' to maintain parallel structure after 'doing great and'. This is related to the use of verb forms and pronouns.

× Yes, especially when I have to take an exam, but I forgot about it and I almost get up late so I have to take a bus to catch up the process instead of absent.

✓ Yes, especially when I have to take an exam, but I forgot about it and I almost got up late so I had to take a bus to catch up with the process instead of being absent.

The verbs 'get' and 'have' should be in the past tense 'got' and 'had' to match the past context. Also, 'catch up the process' is incorrect; it should be 'catch up with the process'. 'Instead of absent' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of being absent'. These corrections address past tense usage and preposition errors.

× I almost get up late so I have to take a bus to catch up the process instead of absent.

✓ I almost got up late so I had to take a bus to catch up with the process instead of being absent.

The phrase 'catch up the process' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' as in 'catch up with the process'. Also, 'instead of absent' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of being absent'. This is a preposition usage error.

× So I just go to school and finish the task on the right time.

✓ So I just go to school and finish the task on time.

The phrase 'on the right time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on time'. This is an issue with idiomatic usage rather than tense, but it relates to present tense context and correct phrase usage.

× So I just go to school and finish the task on the right time.

✓ So I just go to school and finish the task on time.

The preposition 'on the right time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on time'. This is a preposition error.

× including my study plan, my schedule of going for a trip and also my career planning as well because I have to study a lot and also at the same time I have to think of my whole life and I can't just mess them up.

✓ including my study plan, my schedule for going on a trip and also my career planning as well because I have to study a lot and also at the same time I have to think about my whole life and I can't just mess them up.

The phrase 'schedule of going for a trip' should be 'schedule for going on a trip'. Also, 'think of my whole life' is better expressed as 'think about my whole life'. These are preposition usage errors.

× I can't just mess them up.

✓ I can't just mess them up.

No correction needed here; the pronoun 'them' correctly refers to the plural antecedents 'study plan, schedule, and career planning'.

× I remember important things by marking it down and then also trying to use different apps in my so that I can really try to balance my mind without forgetting things immediately.

✓ I remember important things by marking them down and then also trying to use different apps on my phone so that I can really try to balance my mind without forgetting things immediately.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'important things' is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'in my' is incomplete and should be 'on my phone' or similar. This is a pronoun and preposition usage error.

× And recording done things is also actually an important skill for you to be prepared for everything as well.

✓ And recording done tasks is also actually an important skill for you to be prepared for everything as well.

The phrase 'recording done things' is awkward and unclear. 'Done tasks' or 'completed tasks' is more appropriate. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue.