Memory— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Yes uh, I uh, I memory everything what I see, touch and read. Uh, I'll even say it's a superpower. Umm, I'm uh, people uh, think I'm super.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Oh yes, that's so sad. Umm, one year ago, uh, my mom said turn off the, uh, the microwave, but I forget, forgot it. Uh, and my home is fire.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I need to remember uh, brush my teeth, wash my face, uh, play uh, on the dombra, umm play the dombra, uh, read the book, study English, study French, umm, do my homeworks and uh tidy my room and sleep early.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
People can remember more if their memories with uh, more emotions, uh, like when you lock the door, you dance, umm, or uh, you turn off the iron, you kiss the iron, uh, you can remember more.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Ваш ответ содержит много пауз и повторений, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и чёткие предложения, избегать лишних слов и пауз, а также правильно использовать глаголы.
Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. I remember everything I see, touch, and read. Some people even say it's like a superpower.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткая структура. Следует использовать правильные времена и более логичное изложение событий, а также избегать лишних пауз и повторений.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, one year ago, I forgot to turn off the microwave, and it caused a fire at my home.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит много пауз и повторений. Рекомендуется структурировать ответ, использовать связующие слова и избегать излишних деталей, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и связной.
Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to brush my teeth, wash my face, play the dombra, study English and French, do my homework, tidy my room, and sleep early.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Ответ интересный, но содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется использовать более чёткие и связные предложения с подходящими связующими словами для улучшения логики и естественности речи.
Ejemplo: I think people remember important things better when they associate them with emotions. For example, if you dance after locking the door or kiss the iron after turning it off, it helps you remember these actions.
Gramática
× I memory everything what I see, touch and read.
✓ I memorize everything that I see, touch, and read.
The verb 'memory' is incorrectly used as a verb here; the correct verb form is 'memorize'. Also, 'what' should be replaced with 'that' for relative clauses referring to things.
× I memory everything what I see, touch and read.
✓ I memorize everything that I see, touch, and read.
The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used; 'that' is the correct relative pronoun to refer to things in this context.
× I'm uh, people uh, think I'm super.
✓ People think I'm super.
The phrase 'I'm uh, people uh' is incorrect and confusing; it should be simplified to 'People think I'm super' to correctly express the idea.
× my mom said turn off the, uh, the microwave, but I forget, forgot it.
✓ My mom said to turn off the microwave, but I forgot it.
The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past context. Also, 'said turn off' should be 'said to turn off' for correct infinitive usage.
× Uh, and my home is fire.
✓ And my house caught fire.
The phrase 'my home is fire' is ungrammatical; the correct expression is 'my house caught fire' to indicate the event happened.
× do my homeworks
✓ do my homework
The noun 'homework' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'.
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