Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons or examples. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things. For example, I often learn new vocabulary and can recall it even after a long time. This helps me in my studies and daily conversations.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured and specific. Start with a clear statement, then explain why or give an example. Also, avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a meeting because I didn't prioritize it properly. This taught me to organize my schedule better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit vague and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a topic sentence, then add specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important schedules and appointments. Additionally, I make an effort to remember the names and birthdays of my family members because they are important to me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but somewhat wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'you know' to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: I usually remember important things by taking notes in a special notebook. This way, I can review them regularly and ensure I don't forget any important tasks or appointments.

× Well, I don't know exactly well what I can actually say that I usually learn and memorize lots of things and by time, when the time passes, I can still remember them, remember them.

✓ Well, I don't know exactly what I can actually say, but I usually learn and memorize many things and over time, when time passes, I can still remember them.

The phrase 'lots of things' is informal and 'many things' is more appropriate in this context. Also, 'by time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'over time' or 'as time passes'. The sentence was also restructured slightly for clarity and correctness.

× Well, we forget this little things, little details very often.

✓ Well, we forget these little things, little details very often.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'things'. It should be 'these little things' to match the plural noun.

× Well, we forget this little things, little details very often.

✓ Well, we forget these little things, little details very often.

Besides the demonstrative pronoun error, 'little' is used correctly here as an adjective meaning small in size or amount, so no change needed there.

× because probably we don't set high priority for them.

✓ because probably we don't set a high priority on them.

The correct preposition to use with 'set a high priority' is 'on', not 'for'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'high priority'.

× What we need to remember in our daily life, of course, some schedules, maybe appointments and the things like which really matter to us, wanting to remember the names of our family members and things like that.

✓ What we need to remember in our daily life are, of course, some schedules, maybe appointments, and things that really matter to us, like remembering the names of our family members and things like that.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and has awkward phrasing. 'Are' is needed to link the subject and predicate. 'The things like which' is incorrect; it should be 'things that' or 'things like'. Also, 'wanting to remember' is awkward here; 'like remembering' fits better.

× What we need to remember in our daily life, of course, some schedules, maybe appointments and the things like which really matter to us, wanting to remember the names of our family members and things like that.

✓ What we need to remember in our daily life are, of course, some schedules, maybe appointments, and things that really matter to us, like remembering the names of our family members and things like that.

The sentence is a fragment without a main verb and has unclear relative clauses. Adding 'are' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my opinion, the best way to remember important things is by taking notes and you know, using those memos or a special notebook to write down or note down really important things so that we do not forget and every time we can check and remember those important things.

✓ In my opinion, the best way to remember important things is to take notes and, you know, use memos or a special notebook to write down really important things so that we do not forget them and can check and remember those important things anytime.

The phrase 'is by taking notes' is acceptable but 'is to take notes' is more formal and appropriate here. Also, 'every time we can check' is awkward; 'can check anytime' or 'whenever we want' is better. Added 'them' after 'forget' for clarity.