Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying "utilize some of the strategy to help me to record down some things that I may forgot," you could say "I use strategies like calendars and planners to help me remember things." Also, be careful with grammar, such as "forgot" should be "forget."

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, so I use strategies like calendars and planners to help me remember important tasks and appointments.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I sometimes forget important items, which means I have to go back and retrieve them, and this can be quite time-consuming and frustrating."

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes forget important things, so I have to go back to get them, which is quite time-consuming and frustrating.

Sugerencia: Try to organise your answer with clearer structure and use linking words. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar, for example, "gather" should be "gathering." You could say, "I need to remember various schedules, such as exam periods and social gatherings with friends. Additionally, I have to remember when my parents come home so I can prepare food for them after their long workday."

Ejemplo: I need to remember various schedules, like my exam periods and gatherings with friends. Also, I make sure to remember when my parents come home so I can prepare food for them after their long day at work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I use schedule books and planners to record important things. This way, if I almost forget something, I can simply check my notes and remember to do it."

Ejemplo: I use schedule books and planners to record important tasks. This helps me remember them because I can easily check my notes whenever I need to.

× I have to utilize some of the strategy to help me to record down some things that I may forgot.

✓ I have to utilize some of the strategies to help me to record down some things that I may have forgotten.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but here the past participle 'have forgotten' is required after 'may' to form the present perfect modal construction indicating possibility in the past. Also, 'strategy' should be plural 'strategies' to match 'some of the'.

× I have to utilize some of the strategy to help me to record down some things that I may forgot.

✓ I have to utilize some of the strategies to help me to record down some things that I may have forgotten.

The phrase 'some of the' requires a plural noun, so 'strategy' should be 'strategies' to agree in number.

× sometimes I may forgot to bring some stuff that is important

✓ sometimes I may forget to bring some stuff that is important

After 'may', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'forgot' is incorrect and should be 'forget'. 'Forgot' is past tense, but modal verbs are followed by the base verb form.

× I usually use calendar and also some of the planner to help me to record down things.

✓ I usually use a calendar and also some of the planners to help me to record down things.

'Calendar' and 'planner' need articles and correct plural forms. 'Calendar' is singular and needs 'a'; 'some of the' requires plural 'planners'.

× I have to do these things repeatedly and it's annoying.

✓ I have to do these things repeatedly, and it's annoying.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I need to remember different schedules including my exam period and also my gather, the gathering time with friends.

✓ I need to remember different schedules including my exam period and also my gatherings, the times when I meet with friends.

'Gather' is incorrect as a noun here; 'gatherings' is the correct plural noun form. Also, 'the gathering time with friends' is better expressed as 'the times when I meet with friends' for clarity.

× I have to remember the time that when our parents come back, so I have to prepare some of the food for them since they have to go for work for a long time.

✓ I have to remember the time when our parents come back, so I have to prepare some food for them since they have to go to work for a long time.

The phrase 'the time that when' is redundant; 'the time when' is correct. Also, 'go for work' should be 'go to work'. 'Some of the food' is better as 'some food' unless specifying particular food.

× I remember important things by using different schedule books and also planners and they always help me a lot when I almost forget something that is important as I have recorded them down and I can just simply look back to them and I can do those things.

✓ I remember important things by using different schedule books and planners, and they always help me a lot when I almost forget something important because I have recorded them, and I can simply look back at them and do those things.

'Look back to' should be 'look back at'. 'Recorded them down' is better as 'recorded them'. Also, the sentence is long and can be improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.