Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免使用口语化且不正式的表达，如“scatterbrain”，并且应更直接地回答问题，同时减少冗余。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details unless I write them down.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，如时态和词形，应注意句子结构的正确性，并且表达应更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as leaving my laptop at home before a meeting, which was quite embarrassing.

Sugerencia: 回答中应避免使用过多的填充词（如“umm”），并且应使用连词使句子更连贯，同时具体描述每个事项。

Ejemplo: I need to remember several things daily, including my friend's birthday, school assignments, company projects, and the schedule for my gym classes.

Sugerencia: 回答应避免口语化的表达，如“like”，并注意语法错误，如冠词和复数形式，同时使用连词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I use Google Calendar to remember important things because it allows me to record events and sends notifications to remind me.

× I'm kind of a scatterbrain, which makes me hard to memorize things without writing it down.

✓ I'm kind of a scatterbrain, which makes it hard for me to memorize things without writing them down.

这里'makes me hard to memorize'结构不正确，应该用'makes it hard for me to memorize'，并且'memorize things'后面的代词应与复数things一致，改为'them'。建议使用固定搭配'makes it hard for someone to do something'。

× Especially something like forgot to bring my laptop to the meeting, which is really embarrassed.

✓ Especially something like forgetting to bring my laptop to the meeting, which is really embarrassing.

这里'something like forgot'时态错误，应该用动名词形式'forgetting'。此外，'which is really embarrassed'中'embarrassed'是形容词，主语是'something'，应使用形容词' embarrassing'来描述情绪。

× Well, I think there are a lot of things such as my friend's birthday, my school assignment, the company's project, and also umm, the time, umm, to have the gym class.

✓ Well, I think there are a lot of things such as my friend's birthday, my school assignments, the company's projects, and also, umm, the time, umm, to have gym class.

'assignment'和'project'应使用复数形式，因为前面说的是'a lot of things'，表示多个事项。'the gym class'中'the'可以省略，通常说'have gym class'。

× Like it not only allows you to record your events, it also will send you a notifications.

✓ Like it not only allows you to record your events, it will also send you notifications.

'a notifications'中'a'与复数'nnotifications'不匹配，应去掉冠词。'it also will'的副词位置不正确，副词'also'应放在助动词'will'之后。