Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如'didn't memorising'应为'don't memorise'，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态和更自然的表达方式，同时避免冗余。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write them down in my notebook to help me remember.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体，但语法和用词有误，如'restricts me to cross'应为'didn't allow me to cross'。建议注意时态一致和正确表达因果关系。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my password while traveling abroad, so the customs didn't allow me to cross the border.

Sugerencia: 回答重复且表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule, library hours, and lunch times, so I usually write them down on my phone or on paper.

Sugerencia: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如'convenience rates'不合适，且表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，并使用正确词汇。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down on paper or on my phone, so I can easily check my notes whenever I need to remember something.

× No, actually I didn't memorising thing very well.

✓ No, actually I didn't memorise things very well.

这里使用了助动词'did'，后面的动词应该用原形'memorise'，而不是动名词'memorising'。此外，'thing'应为复数形式'things'，因为表示泛指多件事物。

× No, actually I didn't memorising thing very well.

✓ No, actually I didn't memorise things very well.

'thing'应使用复数形式'things'，因为这里指的是多件事物。

× the customs restricts me to cross the border.

✓ the customs restrict me from crossing the border.

'customs'是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式'restrict'。此外，'restrict'后面应接介词'from'和动名词形式'crossing'，而不是不定式'to cross'。

× the customs restricts me to cross the border.

✓ the customs restrict me from crossing the border.

动词'restrict'后应接介词'from'，表示限制某人做某事，且后面动词用动名词形式。

× I will write it down on my telephone or on a paper.

✓ I will write it down on my phone or on a piece of paper.

'telephone'在口语中常用'phone'，更自然；'a paper'应改为'a piece of paper'，表示一张纸。

× I will write it down like the schedule, time on starting class and library time, lunch time, everything.

✓ I will write down things like the schedule, class start time, library time, lunch time, everything.

'write down'后应直接接宾语，'like'前应加宾语，且表达更清晰。'time on starting class'应改为'class start time'。

× I write it down on my telephone and I will swipe up the phone screens and I can clear to see the memorizing list.

✓ I write it down on my phone, and I swipe up the phone screen so I can clearly see the memorizing list.

'swipe up the phone screens'应为'swipe up the phone screen'，'clear to see'应为'adverb + see'结构，即'clearly see'。