Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语句较为口语化且有重复词汇，建议减少填充词如“umm”，并且回答应更简洁自然，避免冗余。可以直接陈述观点并用具体例子支持。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, in school, my Chinese teacher often asked us to recite poems, and I was able to remember them easily.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语气词，表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明忘记重要事情的情况，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a meeting because I forgot the time and place, mainly because I didn't make a proper plan.

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确主题句，避免模糊词汇，使用更准确的词汇描述日常需要记住的事情。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to study regularly and read literature related to my research proposals to maintain a good study routine.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，建议直接陈述方法，避免多余词汇，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: To remember important things, I usually make a schedule and set reminders on my phone or write notes to avoid forgetting.

× I remember when I was in primary school or middle school, my teacher, Chinese teacher, always asked me to umm, repeat something like the poems or others.

✓ I remember when I was in primary school or middle school, my Chinese teacher always asked me to, umm, repeat things like poems or others.

这里“Chinese teacher”前缺少冠词“my”，应为“my Chinese teacher”。另外，“the poems or others”中的“the”使用不当，且“others”不明确，改为“things like poems or others”更自然。

× I always forget things, unimportant or trivial things, because I don't have the habit of doing a plan, uh, for example, when I remember that I need to, uh, listen to a meeting, but I forgot the time and the location.

✓ I always forget things, unimportant or trivial things, because I don't have the habit of making a plan. For example, when I remember that I need to attend a meeting, but I forget the time and the location.

“doing a plan”用法错误，正确表达应为“making a plan”。“listen to a meeting”不合适，应为“attend a meeting”。时态不一致，“forgot”应改为“forget”以保持时态一致。

× Umm, I think now in my daily life, the most important thing for me is to study the arrows and, uh, reading some literatures about my proposals.

✓ Umm, I think now in my daily life, the most important thing for me is to study the arrows and, uh, read some literature about my proposals.

“reading”应与前面的“study”保持一致，改为动词原形“read”。“literatures”是不可数名词，正确用法是“literature”。

× So the most important thing is to, umm, keep the studying routines properly.

✓ So the most important thing is to, umm, keep the study routines properly.

“studying routines”应改为“study routines”，因为这里“study”作形容词用来修饰“routines”。

× Or I need to remember some important things in my life. I need to do some schedule first.

✓ If I need to remember some important things in my life, I need to make a schedule first.

“do some schedule”用法错误，应为“make a schedule”。另外，句子结构不完整，需用条件句连接。

× Umm, especially for the uh, reminders on phones or writing down to prevent me forgetting the schedule.

✓ Umm, especially reminders on phones or writing things down to prevent me from forgetting the schedule.

“writing down”后缺少宾语，应为“writing things down”。“prevent me forgetting”应为“prevent me from forgetting”，介词“from”是固定搭配。