Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget simple plans or dates, which makes me feel disorganized. However, I try to improve by writing important tasks down.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu chuyện mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once almost forgot my best friend's birthday. We had planned to meet, but I was late, which upset her. Fortunately, she forgave me because she knew I didn't mean to be careless.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngắt quãng, nên cố gắng nói trọn vẹn ý và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh". Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I need to remember to catch the earliest bus to school every morning. However, sometimes I stay up late studying, so waking up early is quite exhausting.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như "stay on strike" không phù hợp. Hãy dùng từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: I use traditional methods like setting phone reminders and writing notes. I also use calendar apps to organize tasks. Although I sometimes struggle with discipline, these methods help me remember important things.

× So sometime I end up feeling a bit disorganized, especially when I forget appointment or task planned earlier but are always aware of it and trying to improve memory by writing it down.

✓ So sometimes I end up feeling a bit disorganized, especially when I forget appointments or tasks planned earlier but am always aware of it and try to improve my memory by writing it down.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'Appointment' and 'task' should be plural ('appointments' and 'tasks') because they refer to multiple items. Also, 'are always aware' should be 'am always aware' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. 'Trying' should be 'try' to maintain parallel verb structure with 'am'.

× when I forget appointment or task planned earlier but are always aware of it and trying to improve memory by writing it down.

✓ when I forget appointments or tasks planned earlier but am always aware of it and try to improve my memory by writing it down.

The subject 'I' requires singular verb forms: 'am' instead of 'are' and 'try' instead of 'trying' to maintain correct subject-verb agreement and parallel structure.

× The most recent time was about Monica when I almost forgot my best friend birthday.

✓ The most recent time was about Monica when I almost forgot my best friend's birthday.

The phrase 'my best friend birthday' needs a possessive form 'best friend's' to indicate that the birthday belongs to the best friend.

× We had planned to hang out with each other but I was late and it got on her nerves a bit far.

✓ We had planned to hang out with each other but I was late and it got on her nerves a bit.

The phrase 'a bit far' is incorrect here; 'a bit' alone is sufficient to express a small degree. 'Far' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× Fortunately she she forgave me because she understood I didn't mean to be careless.

✓ Fortunately she forgave me because she understood I didn't mean to be careless.

The repetition of 'she' is a typographical error and should be corrected by removing the duplicate.

× My school is away from my hometown, so every morning I have to be the early bird to catch the earliest bus trip.

✓ My school is away from my hometown, so every morning I have to be an early bird to catch the earliest bus trip.

The phrase 'the early bird' is incorrect here because 'early bird' is an idiomatic expression used with the indefinite article 'an' to mean someone who wakes up early.

× But this is not easy to put it in the line because some days I just burned midnight oil and then waking up early, uh, the next morning makes me feel quite exhausted and.

✓ But this is not easy to keep in line because some days I just burn the midnight oil and then waking up early the next morning makes me feel quite exhausted.

The phrase 'put it in the line' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'keep in line'. 'Burned' should be 'burn' to match present tense context. 'Midnight oil' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.

× I just follow some traditional tips, setting reminders on my phone, writing them down in a notebook for example.

✓ I just follow some traditional tips, such as setting reminders on my phone and writing them down in a notebook, for example.

The original sentence lacks proper connectors to list examples. Adding 'such as' and 'and' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Although sometime I struggle to stay fully disciplined, this method helped me to stay on strike most of the time.

✓ Although sometimes I struggle to stay fully disciplined, this method helps me to stay on track most of the time.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Stay on strike' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay on track'.