Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I go shopping with my parents, I remember the prices of various items, which helps me compare and make better choices.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但用词如“stupid”和“very terrible”不够自然，建议使用更合适的词汇，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, and it makes me feel quite frustrated. For example, last term I forgot to bring my books to class, which caused me some trouble.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体，但表达稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词增强句子流畅性。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember where I put my phone to keep it safe. Also, I have to remember the route from my home to school so that I don't get lost.

Sugerencia: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍作扩展，增加细节和连接词，使表达更完整。

Ejemplo: I usually record reminders on my phone because it's convenient to carry it everywhere. This way, I can check important tasks anytime and avoid forgetting them.

× I can easily remember the prices of different items which help me to compare and make better choices.

✓ I can easily remember the prices of different items which helps me to compare and make better choices.

主语是单数的"which"指代"the prices"，应使用第三人称单数动词"helps"，而不是复数形式"help"。

× last term I forgot to take the books to classes.

✓ last term I forgot to take the books to class.

"class"在这里表示上课的场所，通常用单数形式，复数"classes"不符合习惯用法。

× It's very terrible.

✓ It's terrible.

"terrible"是形容词，前面加副词"very"虽然语法上不错误，但在表达上显得冗余，简洁表达更自然。

× I always record reminders on my phone because it is convenient for me to carry it anywhere.

✓ I always record reminders on my phone because it is convenient for me to carry it with me anywhere.

动词"carry"后面通常需要带上介词"with"和宾语，表示携带某物，缺少"with me"使句子不完整。