Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在较多的重复和犹豫词（如"uh", "I, I"），影响流畅性。建议减少重复和填充词，回答时结构更清晰，表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. To help me remember important tasks, I usually write notes on my phone. For example, when learning English vocabulary, I copy the words several times to remember them better.

Sugerencia: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的细节。建议练习正确的时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot the exact time to pick up my daughter from kindergarten, which made me late. Since then, I always set reminders on my phone.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为具体，但存在重复和语法问题。建议减少填充词，使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work duties because I am a nurse in a hospital. There are many rules I must follow, and I also need to complete tasks assigned by my colleagues, which are very important.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复词，表达不够清晰。建议练习正确的句子结构，减少填充词，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I usually use the notes app on my phone to remember important things. Since I check my phone every day, it reminds me, and I also set alarms to make sure I don't forget.

× Yes, I have ones to forget.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten once.

这里 'ones' 用法错误，应该用 'once' 表示一次。'ones' 是复数形式，表示多个，而这里需要表达的是一次忘记的经历。

× Yes, I have ones to forget.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten once.

句子中需要使用过去分词 'forgotten' 来表示完成时态，表达曾经忘记过某事。

× one thing important that is, uh, to pick my daughter's go home when she were at garden school, uh, I just forget the time properly.

✓ One important thing is to pick my daughter up to go home when she was at kindergarten, but I just forgot the time properly.

'daughter's go home' 结构错误，应该是 'pick my daughter up to go home'。'were' 应该用单数过去式 'was' 因为主语是单数 'she'。另外，'garden school' 应该是 'kindergarten'。

× one thing important that is, uh, to pick my daughter's go home when she were at garden school, uh, I just forget the time properly.

✓ One important thing is to pick my daughter up to go home when she was at kindergarten, but I just forgot the time properly.

'forget' 应该用过去式 'forgot'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× Uh, I need to remember my works, working duties, uh, because I'm a nurse, I work in a hospital.

✓ Uh, I need to remember my work duties because I'm a nurse and I work in a hospital.

'works' 用法错误，'work' 在这里是不可数名词，表示工作。'working duties' 也不自然，改为 'work duties' 更合适。

× So there are many rules that I need to follow and, uh, something that the other colleagues ask me I need to do.

✓ So there are many rules that I need to follow, and some things that my colleagues ask me to do.

'something' 应该用复数 'some things'，因为后面接的是复数动作。'the other colleagues' 改为 'my colleagues' 更自然。

× Uh, I need to remember my works, working duties, uh, because I'm a nurse, I work in a hospital.

✓ Uh, I need to remember my work duties because I'm a nurse and I work in a hospital.

'working duties' 中 'working' 用法不当，应该用名词 'work duties'。

× Uh, I always use my note in my phone, uh, because every day I need check my phone and it is also can reminding me and I set the ring on it umm.

✓ Uh, I always use the notes on my phone because every day I need to check my phone and it can also remind me, and I set an alarm on it.

'note in my phone' 应改为 'notes on my phone'，'need check' 应为 'need to check'，'it is also can reminding me' 语法错误，改为 'it can also remind me'，'set the ring on it' 应为 'set an alarm on it'。