Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“my brain is very little”不符合英语习惯，应改为“I have a poor memory”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I have a poor memory and often forget important tasks I need to complete.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但表达略显重复，如“have ever forgotten”应为“have forgotten”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last week my brother asked me to feed his cat after work, but I completely forgot until late at night.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态使用不当，如“was”应为“is”，且句子结构不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

Ejemplo: The most important thing I need to remember daily is to have a cup of black coffee in the morning because it helps me get through the day.

Sugerencia: 回答不连贯，存在语法错误和表达混乱，如“by by write it down”和“my cell phone in a Google”。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达记忆方法，并避免口语填充词。

Ejemplo: Since I am not good at memorising, I usually write important things down or set reminders on my phone using Google Calendar.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I think my brain is very little and I often forget the the important things or forget the the works that I have to finish.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I think my brain is very small and I often forget the important things or forget the work that I have to finish.

这里“brain”是单数，不能用“very little”来形容，应该用“very small”。另外，“works”在这里指任务时应使用不可数名词“work”。“the the”是重复错误，应去掉一个。

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something very important.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something very important.

“have ever forgotten”用法错误，正确表达是“have forgotten”，因为“ever”通常用于疑问句或否定句中。

× For example, last week my brother asked me to feed his cat after my work and I totally forgot these things.

✓ For example, last week my brother asked me to feed his cat after my work and I totally forgot this thing.

“these things”指代不明确，前文提到的是一件事，应该用单数“this thing”。

× When I thought of it, it was at night.

✓ When I thought of it, it was at night.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is to have a cup of black coffee in the morning every day because it was the most important things that help me to get through one day.

✓ The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is to have a cup of black coffee in the morning every day because it is the most important thing that helps me to get through one day.

“it was”时态不符，应为“it is”；“things”应为单数“thing”，因为指的是一件事；“help”应加第三人称单数“helps”，与主语“thing”一致。

× Because I am not good at memorizing things. So now I think of a way to remember important things by by write it down.

✓ Because I am not good at memorizing things, now I think of a way to remember important things by writing it down.

句子不能以“Because”开头单独成句，应与后句合并；“by write”应改为“by writing”，动词需用-ing形式。

× Or just, uh, memorize it. Umm, my cell phone in a Google.

✓ Or just, uh, memorize it. Umm, I use my cell phone and Google.

“my cell phone in a Google”结构不正确，应表达为“I use my cell phone and Google”。