Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“make people lazy to memorize anything”应改为“makes people lazy to memorize anything”。建议注意主谓一致和更自然的表达方式，同时避免重复和冗长。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things because technology has advanced rapidly. People tend to rely on their smartphones to store information, which makes them less likely to remember things naturally.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“if it's matter or not”和“For God's her birthday”不合适。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的表达，并且注意句子连贯性。

Ejemplo: I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel quite sorry because we are very close. I realized it's important to remember such special dates.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和口语填充词“umm”，影响流畅度。建议减少重复，避免使用口语填充词，句子结构更简洁自然。

Ejemplo: As a student, I need to remember important dates like mid-term and final exams. I also have dentist appointments that I schedule carefully to avoid conflicts.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整且表达清晰，但可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯，同时尝试使用更多同义词丰富词汇。

Ejemplo: I usually set reminders on my phone for important tasks because these apps are quite advanced. For instance, they notify me three to five days before deadlines, which allows me to prepare adequately. This method is very convenient and dependable, especially given my busy schedule.

× I'm not sure, but I think I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think I'm not good at memorising things.

这里使用的是英式英语，前文使用了'memorising'，应保持一致。动词后接动名词形式时，拼写应统一。

× It's really rapid so make people lazy to memorize anything because they can just keep something on their smartphones.

✓ It's really rapid, so it makes people lazy to memorize anything because they can just keep something on their smartphones.

句子中缺少主语，导致句子结构错误。'so'连接两个句子时，后面应有完整主语和谓语。

× I think I have forgotten my friend's birthday.

✓ I think I have forgotten my friend's birthday.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I don't know if it's matter or not, but actually she's my best friend and I'm really close friends so I felt a bit sorry about For God's her birthday.

✓ I don't know if it matters or not, but actually she's my best friend and I'm really close to her, so I felt a bit sorry about forgetting her birthday.

'it's matter'应为'it matters'，动词需加-s。'I'm really close friends'应为'I'm really close to her'，表达亲密关系。'For God's her birthday'语义不清，推测为'forgetting her birthday'。

× I'm really close friends so I felt a bit sorry about For God's her birthday.

✓ I'm really close friends, so I felt a bit sorry about forgetting her birthday.

'close friends'应为单数形式'close friend'或加介词'to'表示关系。

× I have some dentist appointments so I also need to umm schedule them on my schedule.

✓ I have some dentist appointments, so I also need to schedule them in my schedule.

'schedule'后应使用介词'in'表示在日程中安排，而非'on'。

× I need to remember the date of exam, I mean mid term exam or final exam and also I have some dentist appointments so I also need to umm schedule them on my schedule.

✓ I need to remember the date of the exam, I mean the mid-term exam or the final exam, and also I have some dentist appointments, so I also need to schedule them in my schedule.

'exam'前应加定冠词'the'表示特指。

× I usually set reminders for important tasks on my phone because the reminder apps are very sophisticated.

✓ I usually set reminders for important tasks on my phone because reminder apps are very sophisticated.

'the reminder apps'中'the'不必要，泛指提醒应用时应去掉定冠词。

× For example, they can notify me several days in advance, usually three to five days before the deadline, which helps me prepare in time.

✓ For example, they can notify me several days in advance, usually three to five days before the deadline, which helps me prepare on time.

'prepare in time'应为'prepare on time'，表示按时准备。