Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific examples using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words like 'like' and be concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, I can easily recall small details that people tell me. Additionally, I never forget what I ate or how many hours I slept. This attention to detail helps me remember important information.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides a good story but could be more concise and better organized. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'like'. Also, correct verb tenses for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my driver's license test because I didn't set an alarm. As a result, I missed the exam and had to retake it, which was costly. My family was very upset with me, and I learned to be more careful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use precise vocabulary. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and correct small errors like 'king keys' to 'house keys'.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important passwords, such as my university and phone passwords. Additionally, I always make sure to take my house keys before leaving. Forgetting these things would cause problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid informal phrases like 'write important things to my hands'. Instead, say 'write notes on my hand'.

Ejemplo: I usually write important reminders on my hand or phone. Sometimes, I set my phone wallpaper with notes because seeing them often helps me remember. This method is effective for me.

× Yes, because like I can't remember something happened like years ago and I can always remember the little details when someone, somebody tells me something.

✓ Yes, because I can't remember something that happened years ago, but I can always remember the little details when someone tells me something.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present and past tense without proper structure. 'Something happened' needs a relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clause properly. Also, 'like' is used redundantly and should be removed for clarity.

× Or I never forget what I eaten for today or how many hours that I sleep or usually I remember my dreams too.

✓ Or I never forget what I have eaten today, how many hours I have slept, and usually I remember my dreams too.

The verb 'eaten' is a past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Similarly, 'sleep' should be in present perfect 'have slept' to indicate completed actions relevant to today.

× I'm always very careful with little details.

✓ I am always very careful with little details.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity and formality, 'I am' is preferred. No grammatical error here; this is stylistic.

× Yes, I did forget my driver license test.

✓ Yes, I forgot my driver's license test.

The phrase 'did forget' is grammatically correct but less natural; simple past 'forgot' is preferred. Also, 'driver license' should be 'driver's license' to show possession.

× Uh, in the morning I just wake up and I forget to set up an alarm.

✓ Uh, in the morning I just woke up and forgot to set an alarm.

The sentence describes a past event, so past tense verbs 'woke up' and 'forgot' should be used instead of present tense 'wake up' and 'forget'. Also, 'set up an alarm' should be 'set an alarm' as 'set up' is unnecessary here.

× So I didn't wake up for my driver license test and it was very important, but I totally forget it.

✓ So I didn't wake up for my driver's license test and it was very important, but I totally forgot it.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past context. Also, 'driver license' should be 'driver's license'.

× And because of this, I need to take the exam and retake the exam and uh, I need to pay again.

✓ And because of this, I needed to take and retake the exam, and I had to pay again.

The events happened in the past, so past tense verbs 'needed' and 'had to pay' should be used instead of present tense 'need'.

× And it's like, it was awful.

✓ And it was awful.

The phrase 'it's like' is unnecessary and informal; removing it improves clarity. The rest is correct past tense.

× My family was so mad at me.

✓ My family was so mad at me.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× Uh, basically I need to remember my passwords.

✓ Uh, basically I need to remember my passwords.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× For example, if I forget my Bill Kent University password, I can't get, uh, my courses or like the booklets,

✓ For example, if I forget my Bill Kent University password, I can't access my courses or the booklets.

The phrase 'get my courses' is informal and unclear; 'access my courses' is more appropriate. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I always need to remember my phone, uh, password or something else.

✓ I always need to remember my phone password or something else.

The comma after 'phone' is unnecessary and should be removed for smoother flow.

× And I always need to remember that getting my king keys before leaving the house.

✓ And I always need to remember to get my keys before leaving the house.

The phrase 'remember that getting my king keys' is incorrect. It should be 'remember to get my keys'. Also, 'king keys' seems to be a typo and should be 'keys'.

× Mostly I always write important things to my hands or to my phone or when I need to remember something I do it my wallpaper because if I don't see that thing too often I will probably not remembering it or forget it.

✓ Mostly, I always write important things on my hands or on my phone, or when I need to remember something, I put it on my wallpaper because if I don't see that thing often, I will probably not remember it or forget it.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect; 'on' is used for surfaces like hands or phone screens. Also, 'do it my wallpaper' is incorrect; it should be 'put it on my wallpaper'. The phrase 'not remembering it' should be 'not remember it'.

× So I basically do them like when I can see all of this stuffs.

✓ So I basically do them when I can see all of these things.

'Stuffs' is incorrect; the correct plural is 'things'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.