Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答えた後、具体的な例を簡潔に述べ、冗長さを避けることが重要です。例えば、「I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I struggled to remember many words for a social media test at school, unlike my classmates who found it easier.」のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I struggled to remember many words for a social media test at school, unlike my classmates who found it easier.

Sugerencia: 文が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な状況と結果を簡潔に述べることが必要です。例えば、「Yes, once I forgot my passport and baggage before a flight, which was very stressful. Since then, I always check my belongings carefully before traveling.」のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my passport and baggage before a flight, which was very stressful. Since then, I always check my belongings carefully before traveling.

Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由と結果を簡潔に述べることが大切です。例えば、「I need to remember to bring an umbrella every day because it often rains in my area. If I forget it, I have to buy one at the store.」のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I need to remember to bring an umbrella every day because it often rains in my area. If I forget it, I have to buy one at the store.

Sugerencia: 回答は基本的に理解できますが、より自然で流暢な表現に改善できます。例えば、「I always use a reminder app on my smartphone to help me remember important things.」のように簡潔に答えると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I always use a reminder app on my smartphone to help me remember important things.

× No, I don't think so. In my school we have a test about social media and I have to memorize many words but I can't memorize all but other classmate can. Good at?

✓ No, I don't think so. In my school, we have a test about social media and I have to memorize many words, but I can't memorize them all, although other classmates can. Am I good at it?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'but' twice and lacks proper conjunctions to connect ideas clearly. 'Although' is more appropriate to contrast the inability to memorize all words with others' ability. Also, 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match the context. The phrase 'Good at?' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'Am I good at it?' to form a proper question.

× No, I don't think so. In my school we have a test about social media and I have to memorize many words but I can't memorize all but other classmate can. Good at?

✓ No, I don't think so. In my school, we have a test about social media and I have to memorize many words, but I can't memorize them all, although other classmates can. Am I good at it?

The word 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' because it refers to multiple people. Also, 'all' should be preceded by 'them' to refer to the words previously mentioned.

× When I yes I have once I forgot to bring my passport and baggage when I was about to travel off road that plane and it was very stressful from this this I have to check my packages before.

✓ Yes, I have. Once, I forgot to bring my passport and baggage when I was about to travel by plane, and it was very stressful. Since then, I have to check my packages before traveling.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. 'When I yes I have once' is incorrect; it should be 'Yes, I have. Once,'. 'Travel off road that plane' is unclear and should be 'travel by plane'. 'From this this' is redundant and unclear; 'Since then' is appropriate. The sentence is split into clearer parts for better understanding.

× When I yes I have once I forgot to bring my passport and baggage when I was about to travel off road that plane and it was very stressful from this this I have to check my packages before.

✓ Yes, I have. Once, I forgot to bring my passport and baggage when I was about to travel by plane, and it was very stressful. Since then, I have to check my packages before traveling.

The phrase 'travel off road that plane' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'by' when referring to modes of transportation like 'plane'. Also, 'check my packages before' should be 'check my packages before traveling' to complete the idea.

× I need to remember to bring umbrella every day. My lesion always raining so I have to bling it when I forgot that I have to buy umbrella at store.

✓ I need to remember to bring an umbrella every day. My region is always raining, so I have to bring it. When I forget, I have to buy an umbrella at the store.

'Umbrella' is a countable noun and requires an article 'an'. 'Lesion' is a misspelling of 'region'. 'Bling' is a typo for 'bring'. Also, 'at store' should be 'at the store' with the definite article.

× I need to remember to bring umbrella every day. My lesion always raining so I have to bling it when I forgot that I have to buy umbrella at store.

✓ I need to remember to bring an umbrella every day. My region is always raining, so I have to bring it. When I forget, I have to buy an umbrella at the store.

The noun 'umbrella' requires the indefinite article 'an' because it is singular and countable. Also, 'at store' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the place.

× I need to remember to bring umbrella every day. My lesion always raining so I have to bling it when I forgot that I have to buy umbrella at store.

✓ I need to remember to bring an umbrella every day. My region is always raining, so I have to bring it. When I forget, I have to buy an umbrella at the store.

The phrase 'when I forgot' is inconsistent with the present context. It should be 'when I forget' to match the habitual action described.

× I always check the things on my smartphone and there is a application to remember something, so I always use this.

✓ I always check things on my smartphone, and there is an application to help me remember things, so I always use it.

'A application' should be 'an application' because 'application' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'remember something' is vague; 'help me remember things' is clearer. 'Use this' is better as 'use it' referring to the application.