Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: この回答は少し不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。例えば、最初に自分の記憶力についての意見を述べ、その後具体的な例を付け加えると良いです。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I perform better in exams that require memorisation compared to those that need critical thinking.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、話の流れが少し不自然です。文を整理し、時制や語順に注意して話すとより効果的です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Last year, when I started my part-time job, I wasn't used to it. One day, I submitted my shift but forgot to go to work, and I got scolded.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が明確ですが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現があります。より自然で流暢な表現を使い、接続詞を活用して文をつなげると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: When I have a new schedule, I always write it down in my diary so I don't forget. Also, I find the reminder function on my smartphone very useful.

Sugerencia: 回答は比較的良いですが、一部文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。接続詞の使い方を改善し、文を簡潔にまとめるとさらに良くなります。

Ejemplo: I remember important things by writing new schedules in my diary. In addition, I use the reminder function on my smartphone, which helps me stay organized throughout the day.

× I can perform better in like memorizing tests compared with critical thinking exam.

✓ I can perform better in memorizing tests compared with critical thinking exams.

The preposition 'in like' is incorrect and unnecessary here. Also, 'exam' should be plural to match 'tests'. Use 'in memorizing tests' to correctly express the context.

× that day I submitted my shift but I forgot to go to go to part time job and I was I got scolded.

✓ That day I submitted my shift but I forgot to go to my part-time job and I got scolded.

The phrase 'go to go to' is a repetition error. Also, 'part time job' should be 'my part-time job' to specify possession and use the correct compound adjective. 'I was I got scolded' is redundant; 'I got scolded' is sufficient.

× I always try to write down on my diary so that I never forget that.

✓ I always try to write it down in my diary so that I never forget it.

The correct preposition with 'write down' when referring to a diary is 'in', not 'on'. Also, 'write down' usually takes an object, so 'it' is added for clarity.

× for me it is a useful, uh, for me the reminder function on my smartphone is very useful.

✓ For me, the reminder function on my smartphone is very useful.

The phrase 'it is a useful' is incomplete and awkward. Removing redundancy and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× I find the reminder function, my smartphone be useful because it allows me at night time, helping me stay organized throughout the day.

✓ I find the reminder function on my smartphone useful because it helps me at night, helping me stay organized throughout the day.

The phrase 'my smartphone be useful' is incorrect; it should be 'on my smartphone useful'. Also, 'allows me at night time' is awkward; 'helps me at night' is more natural. The definite article 'the' is correctly used before 'reminder function'.