Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如'memories things'应为'memorising things'，以及时态和单复数的使用不准确。建议注意动词形式和时态的一致性，同时避免冗余表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things because at school I could remember many English words in a short time. My teacher often praised me for my good memory.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和人称代词使用错误，如'realized I really nervous'应为'was really nervous'，'he forgiven me'应为'she forgave me'。建议加强语法基础，注意时态和代词的正确使用。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. When I realized it, I was really nervous. Then I apologized to her and sent her a gift. Fortunately, she forgave me.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为简单，时态使用不一致（'must get up'和'had to do'），建议统一时态并丰富细节，使回答更具体和连贯。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember several things. For example, from Monday to Friday, I must get up at 7:00 to go to school, and in the afternoon, I usually do some sports to stay healthy.

Sugerencia: 回答简洁但缺乏细节和连贯性，建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并具体说明使用备忘录和纸张的情况。

Ejemplo: Well, I usually type important things in my memo app, and if something is very important, I write it down on paper to make sure I don't forget.

× I consider I'm really good at memories things because in the school I could remember a lot of English words at a really short time.

✓ I consider I'm really good at memorising things because at school I could remember a lot of English words in a really short time.

这里'memories things'中的'memories'是名词复数形式，但应使用动名词'memorising'表示记忆的动作。'in the school'应改为'at school'，因为表示在学校这个场所时通常用'at school'。

× My teacher always praise me because of my good memories.

✓ My teacher always praises me because of my good memory.

主语是单数'teacher'，谓语动词应加-s，变为' praises'。'good memories'应改为单数'memory'，表示记忆力。

× Yeah, I have even forgotten my best friend's birthday when I realized I really nervous.

✓ Yeah, I even forgot my best friend's birthday when I realized I was really nervous.

这里描述过去发生的事情，应该用一般过去时'forgot'而不是现在完成时'have forgotten'。'I really nervous'缺少系动词，应为'I was really nervous'。

× Then he forgiven me.

✓ Then he forgave me.

'forgiven'是过去分词，句中应使用一般过去时动词'forgave'。

× Like from Monday to Friday I must get up at 7:00 to go to the school and in the afternoon I had to do some sports.

✓ From Monday to Friday I must get up at 7:00 to go to school and in the afternoon I have to do some sports.

'go to the school'中'the'不需要，通常说'go to school'表示上学。'I had to do some sports'时态不一致，应改为现在时'have to'，因为描述的是日常习惯。

× Well, I usually type some important things in my memo or I will write them on the paper.

✓ Well, I usually type some important things in my memo or write them on paper.

'or I will write'中'will'不合适，描述习惯动作时用一般现在时。'on the paper'中'the'多余，通常说'on paper'。