Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和主谓一致。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明记忆力的变化，并且补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: I used to be good at memorizing things when I was younger. However, now I find it more difficult because I have to remember a lot of information every day. To help me, I usually write important notes on my smartphone.

Sugerencia: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不完整，建议练习流利度，减少停顿，并且完整叙述事件，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, about seven months ago, I forgot an important appointment with my friend. She came to my university to share some memories, but I woke up late and missed the meeting.

Sugerencia: 回答较为具体，但有语法和表达上的小错误，建议减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇，并且用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: As a university student, I need to remember important guidelines for my assessments and papers. Also, I have to prepare for a conference presentation on October 25.

Sugerencia: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免口头语，使用正确的短语表达记忆方法，并且举具体例子。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down on my smartphone to help me remember. If something is very important, I also ask my friends or parents to remind me, for example, by calling me at the right time.

× Unfortunately now I think it more difficult for me to do that 'cause I nowadays when I grow up I need to remember a ton of information to cope with them.

✓ Unfortunately now I think it is more difficult for me to do that because nowadays, as I grow up, I need to remember a ton of information to cope with it.

句子中缺少系动词“is”，导致谓语不完整。应在“think it”后加“is”使句子完整。并且“them”指代不明确，改为“it”更合适。

× Uh, let me think, yes, uh, just a seven months ago, I forgot, uh, I forgot, uh, important appointments with my friend, uh, she come, came to my university and to share some umm memory and uh, but I get up late so I.

✓ Uh, let me think, yes, uh, just seven months ago, I forgot important appointments with my friend. She came to my university to share some memories, but I got up late so I missed it.

“come”应使用过去式“came”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情；“get up”也应使用过去式“got up”；“a seven months ago”中“a”多余，应去掉。

× I usually write down the important note on my smartphone to help me remember.

✓ I usually write down important notes on my smartphone to help me remember.

“note”应为复数形式“notes”，且“on my smartphone”是正确的介词搭配。

× I usually write down the important things and take note on my smartphone to keep me remembered.

✓ I usually write down important things and take notes on my smartphone to help me remember.

“take note”应为复数“take notes”；“to keep me remembered”表达不正确，应改为“to help me remember”。

× I will also ask my friend and my parents for help to keep me remember, uh, for example, they will make a call for me at that time.

✓ I will also ask my friends and my parents for help to help me remember. For example, they will call me at that time.

“keep me remember”表达错误，应为“help me remember”；“make a call for me”应简化为“call me”；“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为通常指多个人。