Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha açık ve tutarlı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar ekleyin ve gereksiz duraklamalardan kaçının.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when I study for lectures. However, I sometimes find it difficult to remember things in my daily life because I don't pay enough attention.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız çok kısa ve konuyla alakasız görünüyor. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayarak, unutulan önemli bir şeyi açıklamalı ve detay vermelisiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot to attend an important meeting because I didn't set a reminder.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha açık ve tutarlı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanmalı ve cümlelerinizi tamamlamalısınız. Ayrıca, günlük hayatınızda hatırlamanız gereken şeyleri daha spesifik olarak açıklayın.

Ejemplo: Nowadays, I mainly need to remember to study for my health exam at the library. Besides that, I also have to take care of my plants regularly, which requires me to remember to water them every week.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal kopukluklar var. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurmalı, bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi bağlamalısınız.

Ejemplo: I usually set reminders on my iPhone to remember important tasks. For instance, if I have to pay a bill or make a phone call, my phone alerts me so I don't forget.

× If I'm being honest, I can say I can trust my brain to memorize things when I'm studying for a lecture, but sometimes it can be. Hard to use your memory in your daily life.

✓ If I'm being honest, I can say I trust my brain to memorize things when I'm studying for a lecture, but sometimes it can be hard to use your memory in daily life.

The original sentence has an incorrect sentence break with a period after 'can be' which disrupts the sentence structure. Also, 'I can say I can trust' is redundant; 'I can say I trust' or simply 'I trust' is clearer. The phrase 'in your daily life' is better as 'in daily life' for naturalness.

× Actually nowadays I have been just going to library to study for my health exam.

✓ Actually, nowadays I have just been going to the library to study for my health exam.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary here. The adverb 'just' is better placed before 'been going' for correct emphasis. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves readability.

× I don't work or study now so maybe watching my plants for a week can be.

✓ I don't work or study now, so maybe watching my plants for a week can be enough.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'enough' completes the thought. Also, a comma before 'so' is needed to separate the clauses.

× Usually I put my reminders.

✓ Usually, I set my reminders.

The verb 'put' is not appropriate for reminders; 'set' is the correct verb. Also, a comma after 'Usually' improves sentence flow.

× So in a day if I had significant. Tusks my phone bill remind me to ring a day.

✓ So in a day, if I have significant tasks, my phone will remind me to make a call.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'had' should be 'have' to match present tense, 'Tusks' is a misspelling of 'tasks', 'phone bill' should be 'phone', and 'ring a day' is unclear and corrected to 'make a call'. Also, punctuation and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.