Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In your answer, try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, start with a direct statement about your memorising ability, then explain with a specific example and a reason. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, during my studies, I find it hard to remember even simple facts quickly because I need more time to process information. As a result, I often forget things that happened a couple of weeks ago.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your thoughts logically and use linking words to explain your example clearly. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a specific example of something important you forgot and explain why it happened.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget important things because I am quite forgetful. For instance, once I had a practical class about flower characteristics, but I forgot to bring the flower needed for the class. This happened because I was distracted and didn't prepare properly.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, mention the medicine and the lap key clearly, and explain why they are important to remember.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicine on time because of my health condition. Also, I must not forget to bring my laptop key, as it is essential for my work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain your method of remembering. Also, avoid grammatical errors and finish your sentences fully.

Ejemplo: Since I am forgetful, I keep a diary to remember important things. I write down all the tasks and appointments I need to do each day, which helps me avoid missing anything important.

× Well, I would say I'm very weak in memorizing things.

✓ Well, I would say I'm very weak at memorizing things.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'weak' here; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to skills or abilities.

× Like for example, during my studies, I'm not, I won't be able to memorize even the easiest things very quickly.

✓ Like for example, during my studies, I was not able to memorize even the easiest things very quickly.

The sentence refers to past studies, so the modal verb 'won't' (future) is incorrect; it should be past tense 'was not able to' to match the time frame.

× It takes sometimes for me to memorize things and all.

✓ It sometimes takes me time to memorize things and all.

The adverb 'sometimes' is misplaced; it should be placed before the verb 'takes' and the phrase 'takes me time' is more natural.

× And most of the time the things that happened two weeks before and all, it doesn't stay in my mind.

✓ And most of the time, the things that happened two weeks ago do not stay in my mind.

The phrase 'two weeks before' is incorrect; 'two weeks ago' is the correct expression for past time. Also, 'things' is plural, so 'do not' is used instead of 'does not'.

× Oh yes, this happens multiple time with me.

✓ Oh yes, this happens multiple times with me.

The noun 'time' should be plural 'times' when preceded by 'multiple'.

× For example, it's like there's one incident.

✓ For example, there was one incident.

The phrase 'it's like there's one incident' is awkward and unclear; a clearer past tense sentence is appropriate.

× It's like it I have a practical class class but I forgot to take flower since we are sitting on a flower characteristics.

✓ I had a practical class, but I forgot to bring flowers since we were studying flower characteristics.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repetition and incorrect word usage; rephrasing clarifies meaning and corrects tense and vocabulary.

× I don't know why but I always use the.

✓ I don't know why, but I always forget it.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrect; replacing with a complete sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× Well, during a daily activities, there's one very specific and very important or very significant things I must remember is that to take a medicine on time which I have some health problem and to do not and not to forget to take a lap key with.

✓ Well, during daily activities, there is one very specific and very important thing I must remember: to take medicine on time because I have some health problems, and not to forget to take my lab key with me.

The phrase 'a daily activities' is incorrect; 'daily activities' is plural without 'a'. 'Things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'one'. 'A medicine' is incorrect; 'medicine' is uncountable. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Well-being is a forgetful person, I used to miss out or or left out very important things.

✓ Well, being a forgetful person, I used to miss or leave out very important things.

'Well-being' is incorrect here; it should be 'Well, being'. Also, 'left out' is past tense; parallel structure requires 'leave out' after 'miss'.

× So in order to prevent or avoid that from happening, I always used to maintain one diary.

✓ So in order to prevent or avoid that from happening, I always maintain a diary.

'Used to' implies past habit, but 'always' suggests present habit; to express current habit, use present tense 'maintain'.

× In this diary I used to write everything that most most need a day after.

✓ In this diary, I write everything that I need to remember the next day.

The phrase 'most most need a day after' is unclear and incorrect; rephrasing clarifies meaning and corrects quantifier usage.