Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No, I'm not good in a memorizing thing because, uh, I easily forget, uh, anything's where I can put uh, after that I forgot where I can board. Who get it then This that why?
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I remember that when I was in a 12th grade. At that time I forgot my my passport because my school need my passport photos. That's why this is the time when I forget my passport in the library.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I always prefer to make a schedule ahead to memorize my in daily task in my life.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
Mostly I tell to my parents where I can put my important documents and any other important stuff so that I can easily find it as soon as possible.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases. Use simple, correct grammar and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, explain why you find memorising difficult and give a specific example.
Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget where I put them. For instance, I often misplace my keys and have to search for them later.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.
Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my passport when I was in 12th grade because my school needed passport photos. I left it in the library and only realized it later.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Provide a complete and clear answer with proper grammar. Use linking words to explain your method and why it helps. Avoid awkward phrasing and be specific about what you remember.
Ejemplo: I usually make a schedule in advance to remember my daily tasks because it helps me stay organized and not forget important activities.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Try to use clearer sentence structure and avoid unnecessary words. Start with a direct answer and then explain your method with specific details and linking words.
Ejemplo: I usually tell my parents where I put important documents so they can remind me if I forget. This way, I can find them quickly when needed.
× No, I'm not good in a memorizing thing because, uh, I easily forget, uh, anything's where I can put uh, after that I forgot where I can board. Who get it then This that why?
✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I easily forget where I put them, and after that, I forget where I put them. Who gets it then? That's why.
The phrase 'good in a memorizing thing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' followed by the gerund 'memorizing things'. Also, 'anything's where I can put' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'where I put them'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification. Using 'Who get it then This that why?' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'Who gets it then? That's why.' The corrections improve clarity and correct preposition usage.
× Yes, I remember that when I was in a 12th grade. At that time I forgot my my passport because my school need my passport photos. That's why this is the time when I forget my passport in the library.
✓ Yes, I remember when I was in 12th grade. At that time, I forgot my passport because my school needed my passport photos. That's why this is the time when I forgot my passport in the library.
The phrase 'in a 12th grade' is incorrect; it should be 'in 12th grade' without the article. The verb 'need' should be in the past tense 'needed' to agree with the past time frame. Also, 'I forget' should be 'I forgot' to maintain past tense consistency. These corrections ensure proper past tense usage and article omission where appropriate.
× I always prefer to make a schedule ahead to memorize my in daily task in my life.
✓ I always prefer to make a schedule ahead to remember my daily tasks in my life.
The phrase 'memorize my in daily task' is incorrect. The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Also, 'memorize' is not the best verb here; 'remember' fits better. The correction removes the incorrect preposition and adjusts the noun and verb for clarity and correctness.
× Mostly I tell to my parents where I can put my important documents and any other important stuff so that I can easily find it as soon as possible.
✓ Mostly, I tell my parents where I put my important documents and other important stuff so that I can easily find them as soon as possible.
The verb 'tell' does not require the preposition 'to' when followed by an indirect object; 'tell my parents' is correct. Also, 'where I can put' should be 'where I put' to indicate habitual action. 'Any other important stuff' is better as 'other important stuff' for naturalness. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'documents and stuff'. These corrections fix preposition misuse and pronoun agreement.