Memory— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
I would say yes, because ever since I was a kid I had this quality of learning and memorising things quickly and precisely, so I guess I would say I'm good at it.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I've forgotten many things in my day-to-day life, like putting salt in my food or milk or sugar in my milk. But if I had to talk about one time, for instance, I would say that I forgot my ID card at my home for my very important exam, so I had to come all the way back to my home to get it, and then I had to travel back to the school.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Since I'm a student, so I have to remember all the lectures and lessons so that I do good in my exams. Additionally, uh, I take specific medications, uh, at different intervals in my days, so I have to keep in them in my mind and I have to remind myself daily to take him.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I have a basic rule of memorizing things better. That is to keep playing it back in my mind so that, uh, that thing comes repetitively in your mind and you are, uh, you are again and you get you, you remember it again and again. It keeps on coming to your mind.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases like "I would say" twice. Also, add a linking phrase to make your answer more coherent.
Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because since childhood, I have been able to learn and remember information quickly and accurately.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: Your answer is detailed and specific, which is good. However, try to organise your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid minor hesitations and repetitions.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot my ID card at home on the day of an important exam, so I had to return home to get it and then travel back to school, which was quite stressful.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Your answer has relevant content but contains some grammatical errors and hesitations. Avoid filler words like "uh" and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ejemplo: As a student, I need to remember my lectures and lessons to perform well in exams. Moreover, I take certain medications at specific times during the day, so I have to remind myself to take them regularly.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your method logically.
Ejemplo: I remember important things by repeatedly recalling them in my mind. This repetition helps reinforce the memory and makes it easier to remember later.
Gramática
× Since I'm a student, so I have to remember all the lectures and lessons so that I do good in my exams.
✓ Since I'm a student, I have to remember all the lectures and lessons so that I do well in my exams.
The sentence incorrectly uses both 'Since' and 'so' together, which is redundant. 'Since' alone is sufficient to show cause. Also, 'do good' should be 'do well' because 'well' is the correct adverb to describe performing in exams.
× Additionally, uh, I take specific medications, uh, at different intervals in my days, so I have to keep in them in my mind and I have to remind myself daily to take him.
✓ Additionally, uh, I take specific medications, uh, at different intervals in my days, so I have to keep them in my mind and I have to remind myself daily to take them.
The pronouns 'in them' and 'take him' are incorrect. The correct pronouns referring to 'medications' (plural) are 'them'. So, it should be 'keep them in my mind' and 'remind myself daily to take them'.
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