Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'the memorizing things' and 'asked us to receive the classical book'. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, when I was in primary school, I had to memorize classical Chinese books like the Analects and the Art of War, which I found very difficult.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing such as 'last time when I was seeing a driver's license exam' and 'for fortunately there has a place apply for temporary ID cards'. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite forgetful. For instance, during my driver's license exam, I forgot to bring my ID card because I left it at home. Fortunately, there was a place where I could apply for a temporary ID, which helped me a lot.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors like 'I have to remember all the time management' and 'I have to memorizing'. Avoid filler words and try to make your sentences more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to manage my time carefully because I often forget important things. Therefore, I make schedules for my work and study. Since I am a college student with a part-time job, I have to remember both my work hours and class times, which can be challenging.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and filler words. For example, 'make a note at phone' should be 'make a note on my phone', and 'If the things is very urgency' should be 'If the matter is very urgent'. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: When I have something important to remember, I usually make a note on my phone immediately. Depending on how important it is, I also set an alarm. If it's very urgent, I might remind myself several times to make sure I don't forget.

× No, I'm not good at the memorizing things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before the gerund 'memorizing things'. In English, when referring to an activity in general, we do not use 'the' before the gerund. Therefore, 'the memorizing things' should be corrected to 'memorizing things'. This improves the sentence's naturalness and grammatical correctness.

× when I was in the primary school, the teacher asked us to receive the classical book in Chinese, like the, uh, an Analectors.

✓ when I was in primary school, the teacher asked us to receive classical books in Chinese, like the Analects.

The phrase 'in the primary school' is incorrect because 'primary school' is a general institution and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the classical book' should be plural 'classical books' to match the context, and 'an Analectors' is incorrect; the correct term is 'the Analects' (a proper noun for a classical Chinese text). These corrections fix article usage and noun number errors.

× when I was in the primary school, the teacher asked us to receive the classical book in Chinese, like the, uh, an Analectors.

✓ when I was in primary school, the teacher asked us to receive classical books in Chinese, like the Analects.

The phrase 'the classical book' should be plural 'classical books' because it refers to more than one book, as indicated by the examples given. Also, 'an Analectors' is incorrect; the correct term is 'the Analects'. This correction addresses the singular/plural mismatch and proper noun usage.

× I was so bad at it and it's difficult to.

✓ I was so bad at it and it was difficult too.

The phrase 'it's difficult to' is incomplete and awkward. The correct expression is 'it was difficult too' to maintain past tense consistency and proper sentence structure. 'Too' is used to mean 'also' here, and 'to' is incorrect in this context.

× last time when I was seeing a driver's license exam, the coach asked me for the ID card but I forgot it's at home.

✓ last time when I was taking a driver's license exam, the coach asked me for the ID card but I forgot it was at home.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'taking' when referring to an exam. Also, 'it's at home' should be in past tense 'it was at home' to match the past context. These corrections fix verb choice and tense consistency.

× Uh, for fortunately there has a place apply for temporary ID cards.

✓ Uh, fortunately there is a place to apply for temporary ID cards.

The phrase 'there has a place apply' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'there is a place to apply'. 'There is' is the correct form of 'there be' for singular nouns, and 'to apply' is the correct infinitive form after 'place'. Also, 'for fortunately' is incorrect; it should be 'fortunately'.

× Obviously they are very experienced in this matter.

✓ Obviously, they are very experienced in this matter.

A comma is needed after 'Obviously' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause. The preposition 'in' is correctly used here, so no change is needed for preposition, but punctuation improves clarity.

× Since I was a college student also I got a part time job, so I have to memorizing the work time, also the class time.

✓ Since I was a college student and also got a part-time job, I have to memorize the work time and the class time.

The phrase 'have to memorizing' is incorrect; after 'have to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'memorize' is correct. Also, 'also I got' should be connected with 'and also got' for better sentence structure. 'Part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time'. These corrections fix verb form and sentence structure.

× Since I was a college student also I got a part time job, so I have to memorizing the work time, also the class time.

✓ Since I was a college student and also got a part-time job, I have to memorize the work time and the class time.

The conjunction 'also' should be connected with 'and' to properly link the two clauses. The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions, making it awkward. Adding 'and' improves the flow and clarity.

× Uh, that kind of challenging.

✓ Uh, that kind of thing is challenging.

The phrase 'that kind of challenging' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Kind' is a noun and needs to be followed by a noun or a clause. Adding 'thing is' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× When I got something important event, I will usually make a note at phone immediately and depends on the importance of the matters.

✓ When I have an important event, I usually make a note on my phone immediately and depend on the importance of the matter.

The phrase 'When I got something important event' is incorrect; it should be 'When I have an important event' to use present tense for habitual action. 'Make a note at phone' should be 'make a note on my phone'. 'Depends' should be 'depend' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Matters' should be singular 'matter' to match 'importance'. These corrections fix tense, prepositions, subject-verb agreement, and noun number.

× I will usually make a note at phone immediately and depends on the importance of the matters.

✓ I usually make a note on my phone immediately and depend on the importance of the matter.

The use of 'will' is unnecessary here because the sentence describes habitual action, which is better expressed with the simple present tense. Also, 'depends' should be 'depend' to agree with the subject 'I'. This correction improves verb tense and subject-verb agreement.

× If the things is very urgency, I will just uh, I will just to say the very more no.

✓ If the thing is very urgent, I will just, uh, say it out loud.

'Things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'is'. 'Urgency' is a noun; the adjective 'urgent' is needed here. The phrase 'I will just to say the very more no' is unclear and incorrect; a clearer expression is 'I will just say it out loud'. These corrections fix noun number, adjective use, and sentence clarity.