Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: この回答は、話の流れが不自然で、文法的な誤りや言葉の選択ミスが見られます。例えば、「I'm gonna add memorizing things」は意味が不明瞭で、代わりに「I am good at memorizing things」と言うべきです。また、話が途中で途切れているため、明確で簡潔な答えを心がけ、5文以内で完結させましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, when I visit new places, I try to remember the route and important buildings. This helps me find my way easily next time. I also share this information with my family or friends when we visit together.

Sugerencia: この回答は文法的に不正確で、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「the meeting to getting opportunity for internship」は「a meeting about an internship opportunity」と言い換えましょう。また、話が曖昧で具体性に欠けるため、具体的な状況や理由を明確に述べることが重要です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting about an internship opportunity. The schedules overlapped, so I didn't manage my time well. As a result, I missed the chance to attend the meeting, which was disappointing.

Sugerencia: 回答は比較的明確ですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。例えば、「the one thing I've been in my mind」は「one thing I always keep in mind」に修正しましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

Ejemplo: One thing I always keep in mind is to write down my schedule and visualize what I need to do each day. This method helps me remember my tasks effectively and stay organized.

Sugerencia: この回答は文法的な誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「I lied down the schedule in line」は「I write down my schedule in a list」に修正しましょう。また、話を整理して、接続詞を使いながら簡潔に答えることが大切です。

Ejemplo: As I mentioned earlier, I write down my schedule in a list, which helps me remember tasks. For important events, I set reminders on my mobile phone calendar, so I get notified a week in advance.

× I'm gonna add memorizing things.

✓ I'm going to add memorizing things.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech or writing for clarity and correctness.

× when I first visit new places

✓ when I first visited new places

The action refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'visited' instead of present tense 'visit'.

× I memorize the way or building up

✓ I memorize the way or buildings

'Building up' is incorrect here; the plural noun 'buildings' fits the context of multiple structures to remember.

× the schedules was overlapped

✓ the schedules were overlapped

'Schedules' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' to agree in number.

× I lied down the schedule in line.

✓ I laid down the schedule in line.

The past tense of 'lie' (to recline) is 'lay', but here the correct verb is 'lay' (to put or place), past tense 'laid'. 'Lied' means to tell an untruth, which is incorrect here.