Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用更简洁和自然的句子表达你的观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I was good at memorizing articles and songs when I was a child. However, I don't think my memory is very strong now because I often forget things.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议加强句子结构的练习，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更连贯自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, last week there was a lecture given by a famous professor. I planned to attend it with my friend, but I was busy with other things and forgot about it. I felt very sorry.

Sugerencia: 回答较为简单，建议增加细节描述，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks and the things I have to do each day. For example, I often make a list to keep track of my responsibilities.

Sugerencia: 回答中填充词较多，影响流畅性。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的表达，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Ejemplo: Normally, I remember important things by organizing a to-do list. For example, I save my best friends' birthdays and other tasks on my phone to remind me.

× Yes, when I was a child, I really good at memorizing some articles and some songs.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was really good at memorizing some articles and some songs.

这里缺少了be动词，正确的表达应该是“I was really good”，因为描述过去的状态需要用过去时态的be动词。

× I can memorize a lot of songs, but no, I'm not that good at memory.

✓ I can memorize a lot of songs, but no, I'm not that good at memorizing.

“good at memory”表达不准确，应该用动名词形式“memorizing”来表示擅长记忆某事。

× Maybe it's a losing and it's not that work.

✓ Maybe it's a loss and it doesn't really work.

原句结构混乱，表达不清晰。应使用“a loss”表示“损失”，并用“doesn't really work”表达“这不管用”。

× Yes, last week there is a lecture that provided a very famous professor.

✓ Yes, last week there was a lecture given by a very famous professor.

描述过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态“there was”，并且“provided a professor”表达不当，正确用法是“given by a professor”。

× So I made an appointment with my friend and we plan to listen her this lecture together, but I'm busy on other things.

✓ So I made an appointment with my friend and we planned to listen to this lecture together, but I was busy with other things.

“plan”应改为过去时“planned”，动词“listen”后应加介词“to”，且“listen her”错误，应为“listen to this lecture”。“busy on”应改为“busy with”。

× I forgot this I so very pity.

✓ I forgot this, so I feel very sorry.

原句语序混乱且用词错误，应调整为“I forgot this, so I feel very sorry”表达遗憾之意。

× So I made an appointment with my friend and we plan to listen her this lecture together, but I'm busy on other things.

✓ So I made an appointment with my friend and we planned to listen to this lecture together, but I was busy with other things.

“listen her”错误，正确用法是“listen to this lecture”；“plan”应与过去时态保持一致，改为“planned”；“busy on”应改为“busy with”。

× Sometimes, uh, for example, I will list some of my best friend's birthday on in the phone, and sometimes I will do some, uh, task list on my phone to do.

✓ Sometimes, for example, I will list some of my best friend's birthdays in the phone, and sometimes I will make a task list on my phone to do.

“birthday”应为复数“birthdays”，因为是多个朋友的生日；“list ... on in the phone”表达不准确，改为“list ... in the phone”；“do some task list”不合适，改为“make a task list”。