Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases which affect naturalness and clarity. Try to speak more confidently and use simpler, clearer sentences. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. So, I usually rely on my diary app, which sends me notifications to help me remember important tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and has unclear expressions. Try to be more specific and concise. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I forget important things, so I write them down in my mobile notepad and set alarms. Therefore, I can remember to complete my tasks on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific examples and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember emergency tasks. So, I inform my parents beforehand, and they remind me to complete the work on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same phrases and use a variety of vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I usually use the notepad app on my mobile phone to write down important tasks. Then, I set alarms to remind me, so I can complete my work easily and on time.

× Do y'all nest I'm not good at memorizing something because uh, I'm not a good remember uh, like whenever I need any kind of uh, work, uh, I usually follow my diary which gives me notification, uh, that help me to remember something.

✓ Do you think I'm not good at memorizing things because, uh, I'm not good at remembering? Uh, like whenever I need any kind of work, I usually follow my diary which gives me notifications that help me remember things.

The original sentence misuses pronouns such as 'y'all' instead of 'you' and 'remember' as a noun instead of the gerund 'remembering'. Also, 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Correct pronoun usage and noun forms improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually write down important something on my note or mobile pad, which is really helpful for me to remember.

✓ I usually write down important things on my notes or mobile pad, which is really helpful for me to remember.

The phrase 'important something' is incorrect; 'something' is vague and uncountable here. Using 'important things' is more appropriate as it refers to multiple items. Also, 'note' should be plural 'notes' to match the context.

× Something like uh, after uh, write down any important task in my mobile diary and I set alarm which gives me notification to do work for this work.

✓ For example, after I write down any important task in my mobile diary, I set an alarm which gives me a notification to do the work.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and articles. 'After write down' should be 'after I write down'. 'Set alarm' needs an article 'an alarm'. 'Gives me notification' should be 'gives me a notification'. Also, 'do work for this work' is unclear; 'do the work' is clearer.

× Whenever I have an emergency task or emergency work, that time I before this work, I inform my parents who are remember who are Remember Me uh for this work.

✓ Whenever I have an emergency task or emergency work, before this work, I inform my parents who remember me for this work.

The phrase 'who are remember who are Remember Me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'who remember me'. Also, 'that time I before this work' is awkward; 'before this work' suffices. Proper pronoun and verb forms are necessary for clarity.

× I normally use the notepad on my mobile phone for remember something which is really essential for me in my daily life.

✓ I normally use the notepad on my mobile phone to remember things which are really essential for me in my daily life.

The phrase 'for remember something' is incorrect; it should be 'to remember things'. Also, 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Correct verb form and quantifier usage improve the sentence.

× I have a number of work, so I always try to write down these things on my notepad in mobile phone.

✓ I have a number of tasks, so I always try to write down these things on my notepad on my mobile phone.

'A number of work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable. Using 'a number of tasks' is correct as 'tasks' is countable. Also, 'in mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone' for correct preposition usage.

× As a result they gives me alarm uh for this work.

✓ As a result, they give me alarms for this work.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Also, 'alarm' should be plural 'alarms' to match 'they'. Proper subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.