Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence redundant. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, ar answer ke 3-4 sentence e shesh korte. For example, apni bolte paren, "Honestly, I am not very good at memorizing things. I often forget details, so I try to write important points down to help me remember."

Ejemplo: Honestly, I am not very good at memorizing things. I often forget details, so I try to write important points down to help me remember.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu sentence structure ar word choice improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun clear ar logical sentence banate, linking words use kore. For example, "Yes, I have forgotten important things before. To avoid this, I write tasks in my diary, which reminds me to complete them on time."

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. To avoid this, I write tasks in my diary, which reminds me to complete them on time.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar clarity problem ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar clear korte, ar linking words use korte. For example, "In my daily life, I need to remember many tasks. So, I inform my parents and also write reminders on my mobile phone, which sends me notifications."

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many tasks. So, I inform my parents and also write reminders on my mobile phone, which sends me notifications.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun answer ke more natural ar effective korte. For example, "I usually write my goals and plans in my mobile phone's notes app, which sends me notifications. This helps me remember important tasks easily."

Ejemplo: I usually write my goals and plans in my mobile phone's notes app, which sends me notifications. This helps me remember important tasks easily.

× I'm really weak to remember something.

✓ I'm really weak at remembering something.

The phrase 'weak to remember' is incorrect. After 'weak', the correct form is 'weak at' followed by a gerund (-ing form) to indicate difficulty in doing something. So, 'weak at remembering' is correct.

× So I try to do remember something, but I can't.

✓ So I try to remember something, but I can't.

The phrase 'try to do remember' is incorrect. The verb 'try' is followed directly by the infinitive form 'to remember' without 'do'. So, 'try to remember' is correct.

× Before forget anything, I try to put down uh on my diary this important task, which help me to remember this important work like uh, in my regular life, I have a number of work, so I usually try to write down this task on my diary uh, which gives me alarm to do this work.

✓ Before forgetting anything, I try to put down in my diary this important task, which helps me to remember this important work. In my regular life, I have a number of tasks, so I usually try to write down these tasks in my diary, which gives me an alarm to do this work.

The phrase 'Before forget anything' should be 'Before forgetting anything' using the gerund after 'before'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'task'. 'A number of work' is incorrect; 'a number of tasks' is correct because 'work' is uncountable but 'tasks' is countable. 'Write down this task on my diary' should be 'write down these tasks in my diary' because 'diary' takes the preposition 'in' and plural 'tasks' matches 'a number of'.

× Before forget anything, I try to put down uh on my diary this important task, which help me to remember this important work like uh, in my regular life, I have a number of work, so I usually try to write down this task on my diary uh, which gives me alarm to do this work.

✓ Before forgetting anything, I try to put down in my diary this important task, which helps me to remember this important work. In my regular life, I have a number of tasks, so I usually try to write down these tasks in my diary, which gives me an alarm to do this work.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'diary'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'gives me alarm' should be 'gives me an alarm' to use the article correctly.

× For remembering something I usually do variety of things such as I before any task I inform my parents who are reminder me to do this for this work as well as I usually write down on my mobile.

✓ For remembering something, I usually do a variety of things such as informing my parents before any task, who remind me to do this work. I also usually write it down on my mobile.

'Do variety of things' needs the article 'a' before 'variety'. 'Who are reminder me' is incorrect; it should be 'who remind me'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× For remembering something I usually do variety of things such as I before any task I inform my parents who are reminder me to do this for this work as well as I usually write down on my mobile.

✓ For remembering something, I usually do a variety of things such as informing my parents before any task, who remind me to do this work. I also usually write it down on my mobile.

The phrase 'write down on my mobile' is acceptable but better to say 'write it down on my mobile' for clarity. Also, 'for this work' is redundant and awkward; 'to do this work' is better.

× As I mentioned earlier, I tried to do something for remember my important task.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I try to do something to remember my important tasks.

'Tried to do something for remember' is incorrect. The correct form is 'try to do something to remember' or 'try doing something to remember'. Also, 'tried' should be 'try' to match present tense context.

× As I mentioned earlier, I tried to do something for remember my important task.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I try to do something to remember my important tasks.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the general context of multiple important tasks.

× I usually write down my goal or my target or my plan in mobile phone note which gives me notification.

✓ I usually write down my goal, target, or plan in my mobile phone's notes app, which gives me notifications.

'In mobile phone note' is incorrect; it should be 'in my mobile phone's notes app'. Also, 'notification' should be plural 'notifications' as multiple reminders can occur.