Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi kalimatnya agak panjang dan kurang terstruktur dengan jelas. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat pembuka yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, kemudian berikan penjelasan singkat dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dipahami.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising theories because they are abstract. However, I find it easier to remember practical things since I can relate them to real-life experiences.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda mengandung beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kurang terstruktur. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan hindari pengulangan. Selain itu, gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide agar jawaban lebih lancar dan mudah dimengerti.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget important dates, especially birthdays of my close family and friends. For example, I sometimes forget my parents' and girlfriend's birthdays, which has made her upset before.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan relevan, namun kalimatnya agak panjang dan kurang terstruktur. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat pembuka yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, kemudian jelaskan dengan contoh yang spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to keep learning new things. For instance, I focus on subjects like GIS, English, and business to improve myself gradually every day.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda sudah jelas dan relevan, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa kecil dan kalimat bisa dibuat lebih alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan perbaiki tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih natural.

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down in my notes, especially meetings with clients. This helps me avoid missing appointments and losing money.

× I'm not really sure about this one because whenever it comes to theories it's kind of hard for me to remember the whole words, but it's the other way around.

✓ I'm not really sure about this one because whenever it comes to theories it's kind of hard for me to remember all the words, but it's the other way around.

The phrase 'the whole words' is incorrect; 'whole' is not used to quantify countable nouns like 'words'. Instead, 'all the words' is appropriate to express the entirety of the words. This is an issue related to incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14), but since 'whole' is an adjective misused here, it fits best under incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13). However, per instructions, only correct mistakes that meet the listed types; 'whole' as adjective is incorrect here, so correction is needed.

× Yeah I often forget something important, especially my closest ones birthday.

✓ Yeah I often forget something important, especially my closest one's birthday.

The phrase 'closest ones birthday' lacks the possessive apostrophe to indicate that the birthday belongs to the closest one. This is a singular possessive form error, which relates to singular and plural issues (ID 1). The correction adds the apostrophe to show possession.

× I can't even remember my parents birthday.

✓ I can't even remember my parents' birthday.

'Parents' is plural possessive here, so the apostrophe should be after the 's' to indicate possession. This is a plural possessive error, which falls under singular and plural issues (ID 1). The correction adds the apostrophe after 'parents'.

× I don't know why it's including my girlfriend.

✓ I don't know why it includes my girlfriend.

The phrase 'it's including' is incorrect because 'include' is a stative verb and not usually used in the continuous form. Also, 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; the correct form is 'it includes'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb form (ID 12 and 6), but per instructions, only correct mistakes that meet the listed types. The main issue is verb tense (present tense issue, ID 6). Correction changes to simple present tense.

× She ever mad at me because I couldn't remember her birth date.

✓ She was ever mad at me because I couldn't remember her birth date.

The word 'ever' is incorrectly used here; the correct past tense form of 'be' is 'was'. The sentence should use 'was' to indicate past state. This is a past tense issue (ID 5). Correction changes 'mad' to 'was mad' to form correct past tense.

× The only thing that I always put on my Internet radar is learning something new.

✓ The only thing that I always put on my internet radar is learning something new.

'Internet' is a proper noun and generally not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. This is an article and capitalization issue (ID 22). Correction changes 'Internet' to lowercase 'internet'.

× Mostly I write them down on my notes, especially about meetings with my clients because I don't want to miss that meetings or I will lose some money.

✓ Mostly I write them down in my notes, especially about meetings with my clients because I don't want to miss those meetings or I will lose some money.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'notes'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'that meetings' is incorrect; it should be 'those meetings' to agree in number. These are incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14). Corrections address both issues.