Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi, ancak bazı tekrarlar ve gereksiz ifadeler var. Daha akıcı ve etkili olmak için cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, 'birthdays' kelimesini tekrar etmek yerine eş anlamlılar kullanabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially birthdays. I often forget my friends' birthdays, so I usually set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz anlamlı ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık açısından geliştirilmesi gerekiyor. 'Embarrassing situation' ifadesi yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanabilir ve cümleleri daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my mother's birthday, which was really embarrassing and upsetting because she's very important to me.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve tekrarlar içeriyor. 'Firstly' kelimesini iki kez kullanmak yerine farklı bağlaçlar tercih edin. Ayrıca, 'exam state' ifadesi yerine daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many important occasions, such as my parents' birthdays and the dates of my exams, which are very important to me.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz anlam açısından biraz karışık ve bazı kelimeler yanlış kullanılmış. 'I sit rema reminders' ifadesi anlaşılmıyor. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak cümlenizi sadeleştirin.

Ejemplo: I don't have a specific method, but usually I set reminders on my phone or try to memorise important things because they matter a lot to me.

× I always forget the days of my friend's birthdays.

✓ I always forget my friends' birthdays.

The phrase 'the days of my friend's birthdays' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'my friends' birthdays' to indicate the birthdays belonging to multiple friends. Also, the plural possessive form 'friends'' is needed because it refers to more than one friend.

× I always set reminders or I just try to memorize the days about my friend's birthday.

✓ I always set reminders or I just try to memorize my friends' birthdays.

The phrase 'the days about my friend's birthday' is incorrect. It should be 'my friends' birthdays' to correctly express multiple birthdays belonging to multiple friends. Also, 'days about' is unnecessary and awkward.

× Once I forgot my mother's birthday, it was embarrassing situation for me and at the same time I was upset about that because she's my mother and I just didn't memorize my mother's special day.

✓ Once I forgot my mother's birthday; it was an embarrassing situation for me, and at the same time, I was upset because she's my mother and I just didn't remember her special day.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence and lacks proper punctuation. Also, 'embarrassing situation' needs an article 'an'. The phrase 'didn't memorize' is incorrect here; 'didn't remember' is more appropriate for recalling dates or events.

× And firstly, there are wide variety of occasions that I have to remember, firstly birthdays, especially my parents birthdays and secondly, I have to memorize the exam state because it's very very essential for me to remember it.

✓ Firstly, there is a wide variety of occasions that I have to remember, especially my parents' birthdays, and secondly, I have to remember the exam date because it's very essential for me.

The phrase 'there are wide variety' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a wide variety' because 'variety' is singular. 'My parents birthdays' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'my parents' birthdays'. 'Memorize the exam state' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remember the exam date'. Also, 'very very' is redundant; one 'very' is sufficient.

× In my view there aren't like specific occasion like specific thing, but in general frequently I sit rema reminders on my phone or I just try to memorize it every time because everything means a lot to me.

✓ In my view, there isn't a specific occasion or thing, but in general, I frequently set reminders on my phone or I just try to remember everything because it means a lot to me.

The phrase 'there aren't like specific occasion like specific thing' is ungrammatical and awkward; it should be 'there isn't a specific occasion or thing'. 'Sit rema reminders' is a typo and should be 'set reminders'. 'Memorize it every time' is incorrect; 'remember everything' is more natural here.