Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议使用完整句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富内容。

Ejemplo: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget them. However, I am trying different methods to improve my memory, such as making notes and practicing regularly.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使内容更连贯，同时增加具体细节使回答更丰富。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things like exam dates or deadlines because I get very busy and distracted. Therefore, I have started using a planner to organise my tasks better and avoid forgetting important events.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，使用连接词，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my appointments and tasks because if I postpone them, they will pile up and become overwhelming.

Sugerencia: 回答基本清楚，但语法和表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，增加连接词，使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things on a piece of paper and put it on my desk. When I wake up, I can easily see it, which helps me remember my tasks.

× No I don't good at it I usually forget things I just do it is a terrible.

✓ No, I'm not good at it. I usually forget things. I just do it terribly.

The phrase 'I don't good at it' is incorrect because 'good' is an adjective and cannot be used directly after 'don't'. Instead, use 'I'm not good at it'. Also, 'I just do it is a terrible' is incorrect; 'terrible' is an adjective and should be replaced with the adverb 'terribly' to describe how the action is done.

× I also looking for what can I do to improve my memorized skills but it's defeat.

✓ I am also looking for what I can do to improve my memorization skills, but it's a defeat.

The sentence misses the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense. 'Memorized skills' is incorrect; the correct term is 'memorization skills'. Also, 'it's defeat' needs the article 'a' before 'defeat'.

× I also looking for what can I do to improve my memorized skills but it's defeat.

✓ I am also looking for what I can do to improve my memorization skills, but it's a defeat.

The verb 'looking' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense: 'I am looking'. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I have forgotten some important things before, such as the date of an exam or important tasks I need to complete.

✓ I have forgotten some important things before, such as the date of an exam or important tasks I need to complete.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I need to remember what I need to do today, because if you don't do it today, you also need to do it in tomorrow.

✓ I need to remember what I need to do today, because if I don't do it today, I will also need to do it tomorrow.

The pronoun 'you' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective; it should be 'I' to maintain consistency. Also, 'in tomorrow' is incorrect; 'tomorrow' does not require a preposition.

× As the as these things accumulate, it will terrible.

✓ As these things accumulate, it will be terrible.

The phrase 'it will terrible' is missing the verb 'be' to link the subject and adjective. The correct form is 'it will be terrible'.

× I will write down it on a paper and put the paper in my desk.

✓ I will write it down on a paper and put the paper in my desk.

The object pronoun 'it' should come immediately after the verb 'write' and before the particle 'down' in the phrasal verb 'write down'.

× I will write down it on a paper and put the paper in my desk.

✓ I will write it down on a paper and put the paper in my desk.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to placing something on a desk; 'on my desk' is the correct phrase.

× When I get up. I can easy to see it that is useful to remember it.

✓ When I get up, I can easily see it; that is useful to remember it.

The adverb 'easy' should be 'easily' to modify the verb 'see'. Also, the sentence structure needs a comma instead of a period after 'get up' and a semicolon or conjunction to connect the clauses properly.