Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite natural and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses (e.g., 'became' instead of 'become') and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 4-5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I used to have a very good memory before I became pregnant, but since then, I've experienced what people call 'baby brain', which means I often forget things. Even though I gave birth almost three years ago, I still find it difficult to remember some details, which worries me sometimes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant with a good example. To improve, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent, such as 'for example' or 'because'. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' to sound more confident.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I recently created a bank account and set up a password, but the next day, I forgot it. This was quite frustrating because I couldn't access my account and had to reset the password.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes, such as 'kissings' and 'keeping our password insecure' which confuse the meaning. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and clear ideas. For example, say 'important things' instead of 'kissings' and 'keeping our password secure' instead of 'insecure'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: I think it's really important to remember a few key things in daily life. For instance, keeping an eye on our children when we go out to ensure their safety. Also, it's crucial to protect our bank account details by keeping our passwords secure, which helps prevent stressful situations like being locked out of your account.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but there are some tense inconsistencies (e.g., 'wrote' should be 'write') and unclear phrases like 'That's a message'. Try to use consistent present tense and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I don't have the sharpest memory these days, so I usually write down important information to make sure I don't forget it. For example, I keep a notebook where I note down things like my bank account details, passwords, and appointments. This method really helps me stay organised.

× Oh well, I used to have a very good memory before I become pregnant, but since then I've been experiencing what people call baby brain, which means I often forgot things.

✓ Oh well, I used to have a very good memory before I became pregnant, but since then I've been experiencing what people call baby brain, which means I often forget things.

The verb 'become' should be in the past tense 'became' to match the past event of pregnancy. Also, 'forgot' is past tense but the meaning here is habitual in the present, so 'forget' (present tense) is appropriate.

× Even though I give birth almost three years ago, I still find it difficult to remember some details, which worries me sometimes.

✓ Even though I gave birth almost three years ago, I still find it difficult to remember some details, which worries me sometimes.

The phrase 'give birth' refers to a past event, so it should be in the past tense 'gave birth' to correctly indicate the time.

× Think it were really important to remember a few kissings in our daily life, such as keeping an eye on our children when we go out to ensure their safety.

✓ I think it is really important to remember a few key things in our daily life, such as keeping an eye on our children when we go out to ensure their safety.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect verb form 'were' instead of 'is'. Also, 'kissings' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'key things'. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'I' and corrects the verb and vocabulary for clarity.

× Also, it's crucial to protect our bank account details by keeping our password insecure as this helps prevent stressful situations like being locked out of your account.

✓ Also, it's crucial to protect our bank account details by keeping our password secure as this helps prevent stressful situations like being locked out of your account.

The adjective 'insecure' means not safe, which contradicts the intended meaning. The correct adjective is 'secure' to indicate safety and protection.

× I don't have the sharpest memory these days, so I usually wrote down important information to make sure I don't forget it.

✓ I don't have the sharpest memory these days, so I usually write down important information to make sure I don't forget it.

The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in the present tense 'write' instead of past tense 'wrote'.

× That's a message that really helps me stay organized.

✓ That's a method that really helps me stay organized.

The word 'message' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'method' or 'strategy' to describe a way of helping stay organized.